Pious Mantis Prays

pious mantis prays


          nefarious plot afoot


                    to devour her mate

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Placed No. 5 in Carolyn Devonshire's "Praying Mantis Haikus" Contest - July 2010
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August 1, 2010 at 2:14 PM
Hello Bob H., i am just here reading your haiku,,Congratulation on your win,,have a nice one,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations Robert on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's contest "Praying Mantis Haiku's". Love, Carol
Conway Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 9:23 AM
And you thought Human women were insane, lol! COngrat's on your win Bob H!~Tirzah~
Arteaga Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 9:25 PM
great presentation congrats on your placement (:
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 1:04 PM
Congratulations on your win, Robert. LUv, Andrea
Freeman Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Congratulations Robert on your excellent presentation in Carolyn's Contest. Agape, Moses
Belt Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 11:51 PM
Congrats Bob on your win....Larry
Johnson Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 9:40 PM
Very good. Congratulations. I am proud to share with this one. Love, Joyce
Taylor Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:37 PM
Congrats, Bob on your win. Great job. You, Larry (My other fav poet), and I all tied with a couple other folks. Have a good one. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Congrats Bob on your winning poem in the Mantis contest... way to go ..my friend.. enjoy.. with luv..
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July 8, 2010 at 8:27 PM
Made me laugh -- your "nefarious plot afoot" -- Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
July 7, 2010 at 4:23 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Robert. I wish you the best always. Looks like a winner. Love, Carol
Conway Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 8:33 PM
That's funny Bob H, I've always love mantises but not for this reason!~Tirzah~
Dietrich Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 6:37 PM
Hey,I was thinking on that lines too and then did the after dinner take. WE both saw that love of food though!! LUv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 5:51 PM
Well I guess there is a new contest ..this is the third poem I have read regarding it.. so I better go check it out.. good luck Bob .. another winner .. I just posted a new blog with some great vacation photos.. bringing a little island magic to my friends at Soup.. if u care to go enjoy.. please see first set.. will post more soon.. we have hundreds.. luv.. AlohA...
Taylor Avatar
July 6, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Nice write. Good luck. Ralph
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July 6, 2010 at 3:33 PM
Good one..I see him up to no good..lol. BG
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