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The pinwheel spins rapidly, controlled by the wind Sadly, as some people allow themselves to be But, there is no freedom in that kind of movement For no other should have the power of the wind in such a way Instincts are like shining gems of truth deep inside Precious to behold, yet still to take notice as the pin wheel stops Then it is time to be led with the sparkle of one’s own soul Heidi Sands 7/8/17

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Date: 7/9/2017 2:07:00 PM
Enjoyed reading,Heidi ~*
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/9/2017 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it :)
Date: 7/8/2017 5:40:00 PM
I agree totally w/Barry ... thought provoking and great mixing of metaphors, Heidi. You penned a gem. Love and smiles always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/8/2017 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Freddie! I appreciate your support, my friend . God Bless :)
Date: 7/8/2017 2:24:00 PM
Thought provoking piece, Heidi. Liked it. // Barry
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Date: 7/8/2017 2:49:00 PM
Thank you Barry. I am happy you liked it :)
Date: 7/8/2017 10:24:00 AM
terrific poetry
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/8/2017 10:45:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 7/8/2017 10:00:00 AM
Such wisdom!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 7/8/2017 10:04:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike! :)

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