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Pinwheel

The pinwheel spins rapidly, controlled by the wind
Sadly, as some people allow themselves to be 
But, there is no freedom in that kind of movement
For no other should have the power of the wind in such a way
Instincts are like shining gems of truth deep inside
Precious to behold, yet still to take notice as the pin wheel stops
Then it is time to be led with the sparkle of one’s own soul

Heidi Sands

7/8/17

Copyright © Heidi Sands | Year Posted 2017

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Eve Roper Date: 7/9/2017 2:07:00 PM Enjoyed reading,Heidi ~* Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/9/2017 2:11:00 PM Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 7/8/2017 5:40:00 PM I agree totally w/Barry ... thought provoking and great mixing of metaphors, Heidi. You penned a gem. Love and smiles always. Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2017 6:07:00 PM Thanks Freddie! I appreciate your support, my friend . God Bless :)

Barry Stebbings Date: 7/8/2017 2:24:00 PM Thought provoking piece, Heidi. Liked it. // Barry Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2017 2:49:00 PM Thank you Barry. I am happy you liked it :)

E Tt Date: 7/8/2017 10:24:00 AM terrific poetry Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2017 10:45:00 AM Thank you! :)

Mike Hauser Date: 7/8/2017 10:00:00 AM Such wisdom! Login to Reply Heidi Sands Date: 7/8/2017 10:04:00 AM Thanks so much Mike! :)