Heidi Sands Poet Free verse

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Pinwheel

The pinwheel spins rapidly, controlled by the wind
Sadly, as some people allow themselves to be 
But, there is no freedom in that kind of movement
For no other should have the power of the wind in such a way
Instincts are like shining gems of truth deep inside
Precious to behold, yet still to take notice as the pin wheel stops
Then it is time to be led with the sparkle of one’s own soul

Heidi Sands

7/8/17

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Eve Roper July 9, 2017 at 2:07 PM Enjoyed reading,Heidi ~* Heidi Sands July 9, 2017 at 2:11 PM Thank you Eve. I am happy you enjoyed it :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. July 8, 2017 at 5:40 PM I agree totally w/Barry ... thought provoking and great mixing of metaphors, Heidi. You penned a gem. Love and smiles always. Heidi Sands July 8, 2017 at 6:07 PM Thanks Freddie! I appreciate your support, my friend . God Bless :)

Barry Stebbings July 8, 2017 at 2:24 PM Thought provoking piece, Heidi. Liked it. // Barry Heidi Sands July 8, 2017 at 2:49 PM Thank you Barry. I am happy you liked it :)

E Tt July 8, 2017 at 10:24 AM terrific poetry Heidi Sands July 8, 2017 at 10:45 AM Thank you! :)

Mike Hauser July 8, 2017 at 10:00 AM Such wisdom! Heidi Sands July 8, 2017 at 10:04 AM Thanks so much Mike! :)