Pins and Needles

Let's take these pins and needles

That we're always sitting on

And sew up this relationship

Before it goes completely wrong

Piecing it all together

These used lives, tattered and torn

We'll make a quilt from wanting hearts

Into something beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Bauer Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 10:36 AM
nice one, mike! i love the whole sewing analogy...
Lane Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:58 AM
Trying to mend a relationship is not always an easy task, but always worth trying. Images of the seams being sewn back together are nicely shown, Mike.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Wonderful write! Fave for this girl :)
Hoffman Avatar
September 19, 2017 at 8:14 AM
You sewed this one up nicely Mike!~Che :)
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