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Pins and Needles

Let's take these pins and needles That we're always sitting on And sew up this relationship Before it goes completely wrong Piecing it all together These used lives, tattered and torn We'll make a quilt from wanting hearts Into something beautiful

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/19/2017 10:36:00 AM
nice one, mike! i love the whole sewing analogy...
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:58:00 AM
Trying to mend a relationship is not always an easy task, but always worth trying. Images of the seams being sewn back together are nicely shown, Mike.
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:29:00 AM
Wonderful write! Fave for this girl :)
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Date: 9/19/2017 8:14:00 AM
You sewed this one up nicely Mike!~Che :)
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