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Pinocchio's Proposal

Pinocchio found a girl She put his heart in a whirl He met her near a wishing well His love of her he must tell The trouble was she wasn't real He could relate to her ordeal She was carved, as was he He blurted "Wood you marry me?" But deaf and mute, blind as a bat She answered not, and that was that

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Date: 10/18/2022 6:39:00 PM
I'm sure she wood say yes, if she could! Fun poem :D
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Date: 11/6/2021 4:46:00 PM
Ha ha! Very good! "Wood you marry me?" Very clever. Like this twist in the tale, Pinocchio now a real boy falling for a real doll. Adding to faves :-D
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