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Written 4th October 2026

Pinocchio

Pinocchio broke down in tears and cried For love had flown away and broke his pride Though he has a wooden heart It gets sore and it does smart Not having his precious doll by his side. You are truly loved Pinocchio dear Of that you truly have nothing to fear It is clear when you appear To all you are someone dear And your persona is still in top gear. His sweetheart met him on a moonlit night Beneath the stars the two cuddled up tight Pinocchio's poor heart broke When his sweet girl puppet spoke And told him that for her he just wasn't right.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Anaya Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 8:48 PM
Oh no, I was in love with the fantasy of Pinocchio plus girlfriend, bittersweet defeat. Compelling string of lims, Best of 🤞 luck, Beryl💕
Edmonds  Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 6:26 AM
Thank you Anaya, though this isn’t for a contest I’m thrilled that you read, commented and sent best wishes… Beryl ❤️‍🩹
Jones Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 4:01 PM
A creative and engaging write Beryl! Poor fella lol.
Edmonds  Avatar
October 4, 2026 at 4:41 PM
Thank you Karen, your comment made me laugh out loud… Beryl 😂
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