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PINKY PIG'S STORY

Pinky was proudly a much loved pet 
And true friend,
She lived with Mr. Smith
the reputed local vet,
Mr. Smith kept a close eye 
On Pinky pig,
She was a little clumsy and 
Somewhat big.
Wherever they went, they 
Created a stir,
Everyone knew Pinky and 
Truly loved her.
Her treat was to trot to 
The village town,
But to get there was steep and
She often loved to roll down.
And always landed at the bottom
Of this road down the hill,
This was part of the ritual, 
She loved the thrill 
And the spill,
And always had a lot of fun.
One day a filthy truck passed
By, weighing well over a ton,
And all Pinky heard were oinks 
And squeals,
As mud flew off this 
Dirty truck’s wheels.
Out of the corner of her 
Sharp brown eye,
She recognized someone
On the truck passing by,
With a sensitive, pink and 
Inquisitive snout,
She immediately spied and 
Smelt her kind out.
The truck was travelling at 
A low speed,
But its driver had in mind a 
Real dirty deed.
The pigs that were travelling 
In this truck,
Were squashed side by side
In their own muck,
This brought the absolute pig 
Out in her,
As she trotted, crying, which 
Made her eyes blur.
She shouted to the pigs in 
This horrible truck,
They were her cousins,
Who were been taken 
In dozens,
To become bacon at a 
Butchers store,
But their blood would first 
Flood the abattoir’s floor!
Mr. Smith had heard 
This commotion and ran,
Towards Pinky's squeals and
Quickly covered the span,
As fast as he could,
For he quickly understood,
What Pinky was trying to do 
And say,
He bellowed as he ran 
All the way.
Meanwhile the villagers began
Lining the street,
And aggressively stopped
The truck from its beat,
They pulled the driver out and
Had Mr. Smith not been there,
The villagers were ready to rip and
To tear the driver apart,
But the vet tried to stop them 
Before they could start!
The back of the truck was 
Closed up tight
But the villagers pulled it 
Open wide,
And now there was nothing 
Left to hide!
All Pinky's cousins jumped 
Hastily out with sheer delight
And surrounded Pinky as she
Helped them escape their plight! 
Pinky was happy, and 
Mr. Smith so proud,
This is my friend 
He shouted out loud!
He bent down on his knees,
Among all the bushes and trees,
And gave Pinky a huge big hug 
In front of the happy, and now
Satisfied crowd!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/29/2018 3:33:00 AM
This is darling! So much fun to read, I read it twice. It made me smile both times. I do love my bacon though, and turkey bacon is not nearly as great.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/19/2018 10:51:00 PM
Hi Caren, I do too unfortunately, but I think that if we were to ever go to an abattoir, we would perhaps change our mind. Thank-you for your comment and so glad you enjoyed it! Regards, Jenny xoxo
Date: 8/27/2018 1:23:00 AM
Jenny, loved this poem! You won't believe it but the next pet I want to get is a Pig. Keep on writing and posting and I'll keep on reading. You doing so great! and I'm enjoying reading them all. Kim
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Date: 8/29/2018 2:26:00 PM
Hi Kim, Pigs apparently make excellent house pets. I'm sure it will oink oink right through to your hearts! Thanks for your encouraging words. xoxo
Date: 8/26/2018 3:39:00 PM
Jennifer, I really love all your poetry , keep up the great work and post more, can't wait to read more
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/27/2018 8:26:00 AM
Hi there, Thank-you so much. I enjoy writing poetry and will be posting more this week. Sorry you didn't signed off , don't know who you are xoxo
Date: 8/26/2018 12:19:00 AM
G'day Jennifer … a great well written feel good poem that's put me off my roast pork. Not really, but I enjoyed the rhythm of your poem - Lindsay
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 11/19/2018 10:54:00 PM
Lindsay, I'm so sorry, still new on poetry soup when I posted this poem, and missed your comment. Unfortunately I also like my roast pork especially the crackling! Best Regards, Jennifer.
Date: 8/25/2018 8:53:00 PM
What a joy to read! I thoroughly enjoyed the flow, rhyme and content. Reading this made me as content as a pig in mud. You have a healthy imagination (me, too!) All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:03:00 AM
Cay Cay, Please forgive me, I didn't answer your lovely comment - don't know how I missed it as you know how I enjoy your input. Yes, our imaginations will always soar higher and higher - xoxo Jennifer.
Date: 8/25/2018 8:35:00 AM
Very cute Jennifer. I also detect the moral within.The older I get the harder I find it to eat meat as I feel myself drawn closer to nature. June.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 8/25/2018 11:21:00 AM
I Sylvia, I feel I have been communicating with for longer than we have. Love all you comments and yes, there is a moral and yes I think i could become vegetarian, agree with your way of thinking. xoxo

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