Pinkie Swear Ii

A boy can drop everything for girls, his initial joy,
kissing lips, most now only playing, quickly run, 
some take upsets very weakly except you, Zebulon.
		~//~
T he little boy always brought his toy truck
H e had many kinds of toy trucks to share
E very day she would come to the park

B ringing her dollies with their golden hair
I n the age of pureness of five and four
R easoning of nannies who watch this pair
D oes not include what children talk about
S o they sit and read, daydream and stare

A chance to catch forty and not get caught
N odding and squinting and feigning the glare
D ozing off longer and longer each time

T wo bright young angels playing “double dare” 
H e with nothing on but his birthday suit
E ven she with just a bow in her hair

B eing “mommy and daddy” from their eyes
E very secret act done with pinkie swear
S uch pureness when lost can never return
		~//~
Languishing lurid lives from lost innocence
is not a good thing for grown guys and gals.
Peer pressure pushes the inner conscience,
it curbs, questions, considers and corrals.
Some likely live licentious independence,
others stop, sort out, apply tenets of morals.


© Jul 2011 for Deb Guzzi’s contest.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:39 AM
whoo, charles...congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 5:34 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Debbie Guzzi's "Aye, Aye, and A Mistress"contest. Love, Carol
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July 18, 2011 at 7:19 PM
Congrats Charles on your fantastic win with this dynamite poetry ... also thankxx so much for your sweet comments on my poetry.. enjoy your special win for excellence and creativity luv..
George   Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 11:26 PM
Awesome! Charles. Sure to top the winners circle. Lainie.
Ball Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 10:29 PM
Nice job here my friend. The innocence of childhood too soon lost as we get older but no wiser. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 9:36 PM
Wonderful young innocent love! Not enough of it anymore.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 5:22 PM
Well done!! enjoyed reading today!
Brown Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 6:03 AM
Good morning and thank you for sharing your poetry with us Charles the best to you in the contest. I have enjoyed reading your fascinating writing today and will be back again soon to read more. May you have a most wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 13, 2011 at 12:02 AM
an art piece from your nimble fingers, charles... straight-from-the-heart!.. winning's best! :) huggs, nette
Warden Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 11:33 PM
Great write,Charles..So tender and innocent..good luck in the contest.
Poet Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 10:44 PM
An excellent write....best wishes Charles.
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