Pink Shoes

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She has pink shoes. Little pink shoes. See? How she can dance and twirl? Jump so high, much higher than her other shoes? They are so easy too, no laces or velcro NO! No need to bend over, just step right in She's a princess, Elsa Of Course! Not Anna, ELSA! With little pink shoes. *** June 7, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 6/18/2017 12:08:00 AM

Pink is so lovely anyway...more when they are worn by little girls. Charming write. :)

Darren White
Date: 6/18/2017 8:13:00 AM

Thank you Sunita :) She is so happy with her new shoes.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/11/2017 9:24:00 PM

Thank you for the super smile you have here planted on my face. Pretty pink pirouettes Piroet! xomo

Darren White
Date: 6/12/2017 12:30:00 AM

sweet huh? :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 6/10/2017 5:34:00 AM

Darren Darren Darren a dance in any color shoe or style is magical in every way. But then again you already know that. The title is marvelous as is the inspiration. Your words reach the reader. You give the total package here with your artistry and presentation. I hope you feel better today. Well done entirely and completely. Allow me to say this is a feel good entry Darren. Bless your little niece.

Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 6:54:00 AM

It's so sweet, isn't it Lisa, sweet and innocent :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/7/2017 9:26:00 AM

This gave me a smile...of course she wants to be Elsa

Darren White
Date: 6/10/2017 6:53:00 AM

Yeah :) Elsa with a frozen dress, and pink shoes :D

Verlecia Fields

Date: 6/7/2017 9:22:00 AM

the words made me think of a very happy lovely person - with youthful play and laughter

Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 9:24:00 AM

She is my little, four year old niece. I live with her, her mum and dad, and her two year old brother :) She and her brother both are adorable.

Anne-Marie Coreggia

Date: 6/7/2017 8:27:00 AM

What a lovely poem and a nice little 'clin d'oeil'(nod) to Frozen with the graceful Elsa who will have to contend with a quite unexpected pair of shoes to dance with:) Amitiés

Darren White
Date: 6/7/2017 8:36:00 AM

Oui, a HUGE clin d'oeil (wink) as a matter of fact ;) Can you see Elsa dance on pink shoes? My little niece can, doesn't matter how strange, everything is possible in the realm of Noor :D