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Pink Shoes

She has pink shoes.
Little pink shoes.
See? How she can dance
     and twirl? Jump so high,
     much higher than her other shoes?
They are so easy too,
     no laces or velcro NO!
No need to bend over,
     just step right in
She's a princess, Elsa
Of Course!
Not Anna, ELSA!
With little pink shoes.

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June 7, 2017 
Copyright © Darren White
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 12:08 AM
Pink is so lovely anyway...more when they are worn by little girls. Charming write. :)
White Avatar
June 18, 2017 at 8:13 AM
Thank you Sunita :) She is so happy with her new shoes.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 9:24 PM
Thank you for the super smile you have here planted on my face. Pretty pink pirouettes Piroet! xomo
White Avatar
June 12, 2017 at 12:30 AM
sweet huh? :)
Ricci Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 5:34 AM
Darren Darren Darren a dance in any color shoe or style is magical in every way. But then again you already know that. The title is marvelous as is the inspiration. Your words reach the reader. You give the total package here with your artistry and presentation. I hope you feel better today. Well done entirely and completely. Allow me to say this is a feel good entry Darren. Bless your little niece.
White Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 6:54 AM
It's so sweet, isn't it Lisa, sweet and innocent :)
Smith Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:26 AM
This gave me a smile...of course she wants to be Elsa
White Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 6:53 AM
Yeah :) Elsa with a frozen dress, and pink shoes :D
Fields Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:22 AM
the words made me think of a very happy lovely person - with youthful play and laughter
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 9:24 AM
She is my little, four year old niece. I live with her, her mum and dad, and her two year old brother :) She and her brother both are adorable.
Coreggia Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:27 AM
What a lovely poem and a nice little 'clin d'oeil'(nod) to Frozen with the graceful Elsa who will have to contend with a quite unexpected pair of shoes to dance with:) Amitiés
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:36 AM
Oui, a HUGE clin d'oeil (wink) as a matter of fact ;) Can you see Elsa dance on pink shoes? My little niece can, doesn't matter how strange, everything is possible in the realm of Noor :D
Green Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:32 AM
This is cute and heart warming my friend. You have written a huge smile within a poem and that smile is mine.
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 8:34 AM
Yeah? That's good! And she warms my heart with her happiness and her pink shoes :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:30 AM
A sweet one, Darren. I saw the title, then saw the picture. A fun surprise....all.
Ella Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Pink shoes are made for princesses :) Your poem is so sweet and fun <3
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:02 AM
She is dancing all day in her new shoes. Delightful <3
Andresen Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 4:38 AM
- All girls love pink shoes ... a lovely poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 4:58 AM
Don't you ;)
Williams Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 3:40 AM
Oh sweet, love her little pink shoes and your sweet poem dear Darren..... Maria
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 4:58 AM
Yeah :) she is so happy with them.
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 12:51 AM
A little pink shoes poem, Short and sweet look great on her feet! Lovely, Duir
White Avatar
June 7, 2017 at 6:02 AM
She loves her pink shoes, and I love her :)
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