Jack Jordan Poet Free verse

Pink Shine

Pink Shine
	
	
	the wind
	a sometimes lover
	singing 
	sensual
	emotions
	risky passions
	soft
	romantic 
	urges 
	sometimes 
	fleshly
	languages
	urges of bodies
	
	put talk aside
	angel
	angel
	pink shine
	eyebrows slightly raised
	she can play
	his right hand
	bare breasts
	slight pressure
	
	here is the man 
	her lover
	see white 
	his favorites
	my favorite
	over
	bed stains
	scenes of love
	forget about time
	I'll shelter you: 
	the language of flowers
	singing games
	emotions
	imagination
	
	my body sings
	
	

         For Charlotte's collage contest...

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Timothy Hicks October 13, 2014 at 6:59 PM I enjoyed the way you wrote this... with incomplete phrases creating the whole picture. And you picked a real winner with your title... it caught my attention :)

Richard Lamoureux April 3, 2014 at 9:58 AM I didn't know there was a contest but I can see why this one is on the winners list. Congratulations Jack.

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 10:19 PM JACK, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi March 27, 2014 at 1:59 PM I always enjoy the sheer masculinity of your verse. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve March 26, 2014 at 6:12 PM Wow, Jack, nicely done. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta March 26, 2014 at 6:15 AM Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, jack

Donna Jones March 25, 2014 at 10:15 PM I really love your words Jack and the way you presented them. Congratulations

Verlena S. Walker March 25, 2014 at 9:56 PM Congrats on win Jack... Verlena

Charlotte Puddifoot March 25, 2014 at 6:02 PM you know what I like, jack! this is incredibly erotic and sure got my pulse racing (though I think if someone called me 'angel pink shine' in an intimate moment I'd probably burst out laughing!)...what I love about this is the way you've managed to build up a mood, whilst at the same time preserving the rawness of the cut-up; you did a great job with this - congrats on your win in my contest :)

Paul Callus March 25, 2014 at 5:26 PM Lovely collage Jack. I had a go at this, but have still got lots to learn :) congrats on win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich March 18, 2014 at 8:47 AM a collage of delight. Love the pink title you gave it!

Skat A March 17, 2014 at 5:33 PM Beautiful...SKAT

Eileen Manassian March 17, 2014 at 2:21 PM Wow! I really enjoyed this collage. It was joined together in a lovely way to bring about a feeling of sensual fulfillment. Great job!

Donna Jones March 16, 2014 at 8:56 PM Jack these words flowed lovely together...I loved it...

Poet Tacito March 16, 2014 at 7:56 PM This was elegant within its lines. You touched upon a familiar, yet seductive shade. Absolutely great job!