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Pink Shine

Pink Shine
	
	
	the wind
	a sometimes lover
	singing 
	sensual
	emotions
	risky passions
	soft
	romantic 
	urges 
	sometimes 
	fleshly
	languages
	urges of bodies
	
	put talk aside
	angel
	angel
	pink shine
	eyebrows slightly raised
	she can play
	his right hand
	bare breasts
	slight pressure
	
	here is the man 
	her lover
	see white 
	his favorites
	my favorite
	over
	bed stains
	scenes of love
	forget about time
	I'll shelter you: 
	the language of flowers
	singing games
	emotions
	imagination
	
	my body sings
	
	

         For Charlotte's collage contest...

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/13/2014 6:59:00 PM

I enjoyed the way you wrote this... with incomplete phrases creating the whole picture. And you picked a real winner with your title... it caught my attention :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/3/2014 9:58:00 AM

I didn't know there was a contest but I can see why this one is on the winners list. Congratulations Jack.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:19:00 PM

JACK, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/27/2014 1:59:00 PM

I always enjoy the sheer masculinity of your verse. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/26/2014 6:12:00 PM

Wow, Jack, nicely done. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/26/2014 6:15:00 AM

Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, jack

Donna Jones

Date: 3/25/2014 10:15:00 PM

I really love your words Jack and the way you presented them. Congratulations

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/25/2014 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on win Jack... Verlena

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/25/2014 6:02:00 PM

you know what I like, jack! this is incredibly erotic and sure got my pulse racing (though I think if someone called me 'angel pink shine' in an intimate moment I'd probably burst out laughing!)...what I love about this is the way you've managed to build up a mood, whilst at the same time preserving the rawness of the cut-up; you did a great job with this - congrats on your win in my contest :)