Pink Shine

Pink Shine the wind a sometimes lover singing sensual emotions risky passions soft romantic urges sometimes fleshly languages urges of bodies put talk aside angel angel pink shine eyebrows slightly raised she can play his right hand bare breasts slight pressure here is the man her lover see white his favorites my favorite over bed stains scenes of love forget about time I'll shelter you: the language of flowers singing games emotions imagination my body sings For Charlotte's collage contest...

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 10/13/2014 6:59:00 PM

I enjoyed the way you wrote this... with incomplete phrases creating the whole picture. And you picked a real winner with your title... it caught my attention :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/3/2014 9:58:00 AM

I didn't know there was a contest but I can see why this one is on the winners list. Congratulations Jack.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:19:00 PM

JACK, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/27/2014 1:59:00 PM

I always enjoy the sheer masculinity of your verse. Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 3/26/2014 6:12:00 PM

Wow, Jack, nicely done. Congrats on your well deserved win - Connie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/26/2014 6:15:00 AM

Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, jack

Donna Jones

Date: 3/25/2014 10:15:00 PM

I really love your words Jack and the way you presented them. Congratulations

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/25/2014 9:56:00 PM

Congrats on win Jack... Verlena

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/25/2014 6:02:00 PM

you know what I like, jack! this is incredibly erotic and sure got my pulse racing (though I think if someone called me 'angel pink shine' in an intimate moment I'd probably burst out laughing!)...what I love about this is the way you've managed to build up a mood, whilst at the same time preserving the rawness of the cut-up; you did a great job with this - congrats on your win in my contest :)