Pink Joy

Sleeping, wrapped in pink, Warm and snug in hand-me-downs: Boy with six sisters.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2012 10:00:00 AM

hahahahaha. THIS IS HILARIOUS. Gotta fave it. the last shall be first with me on this one!!

Kash Poet

Date: 2/17/2012 12:07:00 AM

Jack,congrats on your win in this contest.Enjoyed.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2012 9:23:00 AM

congrats Jack on a sweet win for this sweet sentiment luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/16/2012 5:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Royal's "Pink Joy" contest Jack. Love, Carol

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/15/2012 8:36:00 PM

Jack....very nice work, I enjoyed it. Congrats on your win in Royal's contest.......S.Ronthorpe

Kash Poet

Date: 5/26/2011 1:06:00 PM

Very witty write jack!Best of luck....

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/25/2011 10:22:00 AM

LOL Got a great laugh! Poor kid. Hope as he gets bigger he's not forced to wear his sisters' clothes as he gets older. Great entry for the contest. Definitely unique and the only witty one I've seen! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2011 6:56:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today. I totally enjoyed reading it Jack. Hope you have a beautiful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/24/2011 7:40:00 PM

Jack, this is adorable. I have to tell you if this is for the contest, dedicate it to Ezzelle(I think that is the spellling and if you personalize it for this only girl baby,you will be sure to win with a sweet senryu like this one.)