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Pink Jasmine

Thorns of the plant are so honed; And when thorns prick, I can't even shout; Coz, baby birds, sleeping there in its zone. Oh, the thorns here, to protect them? I doubt! Stings of the ants are too sharp; And when they bite, I can't even cry; Coz, it is me, who naively crossed their route, when they are busy transporting foods nearby. The summer mid day sun glares harshly, even the cold water in the clay pot turns hot; The dry leaves and geckos camouflage the way and the stones there stumble my walk, I cant forget! Amidst the thorns and ant, enduring the pain and heat, my legs step forward, and my efforts don't go in vain There smiles the pink jasmine... Seeing her in full bloom, my inner soul glows... And that's how our life is... Tolerating the temporary pain, will certainly give us a gain...

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Date: 6/16/2020 12:47:00 AM
There smiles the pink jasmine... Your pink jasmine spreading a fresh fragrance of positive emotions.. Great write Supraja..
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:37:00 PM
ahhh, seeing through the pain to enjoying simple beauty. I think you have written of this theme before and you do it so well, Supraja.
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Date: 6/13/2020 3:39:00 PM
Despite the many obstacles you still manage to reach your desired destination, Supraja. In this poem you say this with strikingly expressive words....such is life for those who aim for the very best! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 6/13/2020 8:13:00 AM
Supraja, your poem is a lovely, descriptive commentary about how the beauties of nature outweigh the pains--the heat and the stings! Janice
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Date: 6/13/2020 8:13:00 AM
Beautiful write..
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Date: 6/12/2020 11:57:00 AM
Lovely write, Supraja--great details paint the scene--leading the reader to smiles of pink Jasmine.
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Date: 6/12/2020 10:20:00 AM
Worth waiting for your return my dearest, Supraja. I pray all is alright with you as it is alright with your profound and beautiful poem. Welcome back. Hugs xxx
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