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Pink Fuzz

Brain of mushy pink, Worm curled in my skull, Morph and stand up Under the full moon glow! Don a velvet cloak Of blood and nerve; Whisper in my ear Electric secrets To splatter on the page, Until tranquility returns, When I must mourn once more The loss of you, My muse. (~20 seconds) Write now! contest

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Date: 9/12/2009 12:17:00 PM
Katie, congrats on your success in the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/12/2009 7:03:00 AM
LOVE THIS!!!! KATIE, this is AWESOME. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Matt's contest. Love, Lainie
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Date: 9/12/2009 5:27:00 AM
Congratulations, You did 20 seconds well! Your “Write Now” poem is among the winners in Matt’s contest. Keep up the good writing. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 9/11/2009 5:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest Katie. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/4/2009 7:32:00 AM
This is amazing--and only in 20 seconds! I'll be honest, I couldn't do it in 20 seconds...it takes me like two hours on a single poem! Finally, another gifted soul! "Worm curled in my skull" is so powerful, like a writer's block. I hope you win. Love, Sara:)
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:46:00 PM
Hey Katie! fine quick muse!...jimbo
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Date: 9/3/2009 5:37:00 PM
WOW....!!! 20 SECONDS!!! This was amazing!! Winner's circle....straight on it's way! -- Carrie (Thanks so much for the wonderful comments :) !!
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