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Hello Sara, Deep philosophical piece, hue-laden word choice and seamless flow. A fine ninette. Congratulations on your Lanterne podium placement in Joseph May’s contest. Yours is a touching and poignant work. Warm wishes Howard

Nice Ninette, Sara. I hope it's for a contest, for it should do well. Your imagery is good and accurate. Have a nice day, my friend. Bill

Another excellent one... cedars stay green... lovely imagery and you have done this form so well..

Our coconuts get ready for the tourists when they drop, Sara. Their fronds drops for us to weave baskets and hats for the same tourists. Thanks to our year-round Autumn, Hawaiians don't just hula and entertain, we're also are very enterprising. Aloha, William

They are all beautiful in their own way in all seasons. Your Autumn description is filled with color (I like). Thank you for sharing Sara. :)

I enjoyed your wonderful "Pine" write/picture. They are a pretty tree. Good Luck...  I also did this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

That's the variety of nature, some change, some do not. Blessings.

In the shape shape of a pine tree too, very well worked

Pine needles i really love that opening. Very creative and unique. And i love your use of descriptive wordplay throughout this. This is very fitting for andreas contest too… some changes come to all tree that line hits so strong. Pleasure always reading you

Dear Sara, your depiction of fall in such a magnificent way is simply amazing. The exquisite words, invoking imagery of fading leaves, brittle trees, and dreamy hues of drifting moments, are quite remarkable.