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pine needles turn amber get ready, fall oak leaves turn red drop cedars stay green some change comes to all trees

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Howard Kerr

Date: 11/18/2023 12:51:00 AM

Hello Sara, Deep philosophical piece, hue-laden word choice and seamless flow. A fine ninette. Congratulations on your Lanterne podium placement in Joseph May’s contest. Yours is a touching and poignant work. Warm wishes Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2023 4:42:00 AM

Howard, I appreciate your visit here and for also reading my contest winner. Thanks for time spent reading and commenting on my work. Sara K

Bill Baker

Date: 11/16/2023 3:50:00 PM

Nice Ninette, Sara. I hope it's for a contest, for it should do well. Your imagery is good and accurate. Have a nice day, my friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2023 7:48:00 PM

Why, thank you, Bill. It is night now after a day that was different anyway. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 11/15/2023 3:20:00 PM

Another excellent one... cedars stay green... lovely imagery and you have done this form so well..

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2023 4:49:00 AM

Yes, mostly cedars stay green but they do shed some needles like pines do. Thanks for the high praise, S.O. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Hilo Poet

Date: 11/15/2023 12:15:00 PM

Our coconuts get ready for the tourists when they drop, Sara. Their fronds drops for us to weave baskets and hats for the same tourists. Thanks to our year-round Autumn, Hawaiians don't just hula and entertain, we're also are very enterprising. Aloha, William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/15/2023 1:19:00 PM

Wow!! Weaving baskets and hats from fallen fronds that is resorceful. I enjoyed reading this comment because it was educational. Thank you for your visits and kind reviews of my work. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/14/2023 11:13:00 AM

They are all beautiful in their own way in all seasons. Your Autumn description is filled with color (I like). Thank you for sharing Sara. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/14/2023 12:55:00 PM

I am glad you like the description of the fall colors. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/13/2023 10:57:00 AM

I enjoyed your wonderful "Pine" write/picture. They are a pretty tree. Good Luck... I also did this one. Have a wonderful day/week writing away....................

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2023 12:59:00 PM

Paula, Thank you for dropping by and taking time to comment on my work. I did not enter this one in the contest. It probably has closed by now so maybe next time. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/13/2023 2:10:00 AM

That's the variety of nature, some change, some do not. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/13/2023 4:21:00 AM

Thank you for the blessings, Victor. I appreciate kind review of my work. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/12/2023 12:59:00 PM

a colorful and insightful Ninette, Ms. Sara. Your poem looks like the shape of a tree for sure. I agree with you. Fall brings changes to all trees....some more than others. Am faving this because of its simple elegance. Thanks for your visits & enjoy your Sunday, Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2023 3:24:00 PM

I am honored that you would fav it. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 11/12/2023 12:45:00 PM

In the shape shape of a pine tree too, very well worked

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2023 3:23:00 PM

Why, thank you, Clive. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 11/12/2023 9:49:00 AM

Pine needles i really love that opening. Very creative and unique. And i love your use of descriptive wordplay throughout this. This is very fitting for andreas contest too… some changes come to all tree that line hits so strong. Pleasure always reading you

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2023 11:22:00 AM

IE, as the trees change, so do we as humans. Some changes are good some not so good, and some downright bad. Thanks for the visit and the great review of my work. Sara K

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/12/2023 6:38:00 AM

Dear Sara, your depiction of fall in such a magnificent way is simply amazing. The exquisite words, invoking imagery of fading leaves, brittle trees, and dreamy hues of drifting moments, are quite remarkable.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/12/2023 11:20:00 AM

So kind of you, Lasaad, to give my work such a nice review. I appreciate the visits. They have made my day. Sara K