Pillow Talk

Dreams
Waft
Downward
Billowing
As the bed sheets drape.
Fold in the sides - tuck the corners
For only then will my wrinkled thoughts be neatly made.

imaginationfibonacci

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Deborah Burch

July 10, 2012 at 5:04 PM

:) you are a remarkable and talented poet!! I shall be reading more of your work...I see fav's coming...love ya, deb....Big Congrats on your success...I just read your blog...for some reason my responding is intermittantly validated...kinda like life ;)

Elaine George

August 2, 2011 at 4:00 AM

Superb writing as always, dear John. Congratulations on your 3 entries making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Elaine

Nicholas Collard

February 21, 2011 at 9:19 AM

Smashing Imagiste poem,John. Beautifully distilled. Regards Nick.

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2010 at 2:30 PM

This is my favorite yet. Wonderful symbolism!

Carolyn Devonshire

September 24, 2010 at 2:20 PM

Beautifully written, John. I'm something of a neat freak, but I don't know how to erase the wrinkles of memory from my brain. (My sister says she'd like to remove her skin and iron it -- LOL) Very nice work! Love, Carolyn

Andrew Crisci

September 22, 2010 at 7:27 AM

Perfection seems to be your goal in this inspiring Fibonacci, John! We all are like you..." folding in the sides -tucking the corners!" Thanks for the Honorable Mention in your contest, " Encore. " It was a great honor to enter your inspiring contest. Have a wonderful day. Love and admiration, Andrew.

Dr.Ram Mehta

September 22, 2010 at 5:43 AM

I really enjoyed the metaphors and similes you have used in this write, John

Connie Marcum Wong

September 22, 2010 at 2:14 AM

John, An amazing write! I have never written one of these. Aloha, Connie

Poet Destroyer A

September 21, 2010 at 9:56 PM

a sweet and lovely write, enjoyed..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 21, 2010 at 9:14 PM

Did u view my wedding photos on my blog yet luv?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 21, 2010 at 9:13 PM

Luv this form John and your words are so special tonight.. always a pleasure to read u and your contest is just wonderful my friend.. good luck.. a special theme indeed..hope u are doing well and are happy....luv..