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Pillow Talk

Pansies purple on my head
Indigo thoughts strongly lead
Little kisses in the whimsical wind
Lavender perfume I bathe in
Onyx hair a kinky cloud
Where your fingers are buried now

This inspires a fuchsia fantasy
Amethyst fire you ignite in me
Love is a sea we be the boat
Kindness and desire keep us afloat

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CayCay Jennings Date: 3/22/2025 1:10:00 PM Oh, I delighted rocking and frolicking in your pillow-talk-filled boat. Your lines are awesome, tight and clever, except the 2nd to last and I know you can revise it so it has the same poetic excellence all other lines do (I would want you to tell me such things, too) An impressive Acrostic, Karen ... CayCay Login to Reply CayCay Jennings Date: 3/22/2025 3:00:00 PM Bless your heart, you changed it, did you not, because it flows now OR was my brain just inane when 1st I read it. You be talking to a Macon, Georgia heritage girl. All my peps, Dad's and Mom's be from Macon. As for grammar if you read enough of my poems, you will eventually notice that I totally abuse and and ignore its stated rules. I've had many comments about that, not all favorable, but it's how I roll / who I be. Take care .. CayCay Karen Jones Date: 3/22/2025 2:12:00 PM lol my toying with grammar is due to my southern roots! lol Thanks for your honesty dear poet!

James Peranteau Date: 3/20/2025 5:57:00 PM opens up the theme uv personification for me dear poet...deft write Karen...happy spring...much love Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 3/20/2025 6:49:00 PM Thanks for reading and love returned James!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh Date: 3/20/2025 12:13:00 AM Intimate and emotional connection in the poem Well written. Login to Reply Karen Jones Date: 3/20/2025 12:16:00 AM Thanks for reading Akham!