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Pillow Talk

Pansies purple on my head Indigo thoughts strongly lead Little kisses in the whimsical wind Lavender perfume I bathe in Onyx hair a kinky cloud Where your fingers are buried now This inspires a fuchsia fantasy Amethyst fire you ignite in me Love is a sea we be the boat Kindness and desire keep us afloat

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 3/22/2025 1:10:00 PM

Oh, I delighted rocking and frolicking in your pillow-talk-filled boat. Your lines are awesome, tight and clever, except the 2nd to last and I know you can revise it so it has the same poetic excellence all other lines do (I would want you to tell me such things, too) An impressive Acrostic, Karen ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 3/22/2025 3:00:00 PM

Bless your heart, you changed it, did you not, because it flows now OR was my brain just inane when 1st I read it. You be talking to a Macon, Georgia heritage girl. All my peps, Dad's and Mom's be from Macon. As for grammar if you read enough of my poems, you will eventually notice that I totally abuse and and ignore its stated rules. I've had many comments about that, not all favorable, but it's how I roll / who I be. Take care .. CayCay

Karen Jones
Date: 3/22/2025 2:12:00 PM

lol my toying with grammar is due to my southern roots! lol Thanks for your honesty dear poet!

James Peranteau

Date: 3/20/2025 5:57:00 PM

opens up the theme uv personification for me dear poet...deft write Karen...happy spring...much love

Karen Jones
Date: 3/20/2025 6:49:00 PM

Thanks for reading and love returned James!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 3/20/2025 12:13:00 AM

Intimate and emotional connection in the poem Well written.

Karen Jones
Date: 3/20/2025 12:16:00 AM

Thanks for reading Akham!