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Pilgrims Without Progress

Pilgrims without progress were a people by name, They travelled a road that was always the same. The way that was mapped for the route they took, Was inscribed by pen in a leather bound book. The road was rocky and scattered with thorn, And the people were hot and feeling forlorn. Their feet were sore and their faces were red, And the sun shone without mercy down on their head. The distance was painted with bright coloured flowers, That soothed the eye and filled the long hours; And a hawk that soared high in a bright blue sky, Was looking for food to feed her babies nearby. They kept on walking throughout the dark night, With the moon on high shining her light. A breeze that comforts touched their weary face, Urging them onward to finish the race. Though travels of all made them weary and sore, A need to get there was not helping anymore; For the way that they went led all of them round, Back to the place where the beginning was found.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/10/2012 2:08:00 PM
this reminded me of the isrealites that did not make it into the promise land
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Date: 6/4/2012 11:07:00 AM
Oh, I think that I would rather have the musically festive life of a gypsy, than that of soulfully searching vagabond, Elizabeth. Still one can find the comfort of the breese "Urging them onward to finish the race." A thought probing write!! Wishing you the best...love, Mikki
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Date: 5/26/2012 2:19:00 AM
puts me in the mind of a forty year journey. nice rhyming.
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Date: 5/20/2012 1:26:00 PM
A clever literary allusion in your title! Flowers always seem to find a way into your poetry, and philosophy. Thought-provoking from beginning to end to beginning to end!!! :)
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:27:00 AM
A very impressive poem, Elizabeth. I see by your comments you won a big one with this poem. Congratulations to you. from reading your poetry to this point it is certainly not surprising at all. This poem reminds me of the 40 years spent in the desert by Moses and the Israelites.
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Date: 7/9/2011 8:16:00 PM
Wow... this is pretty good.
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Date: 6/28/2011 6:00:00 PM
you won 1st place in the World Poetry Movement for "Pilgrims Without Progress" - I saw it on the worldpoetrymovement.com site. Congratulations lady, you earned it, you deserved, and you got it...I'm glad to meet a real celebrity...Rich
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Date: 6/28/2011 4:03:00 PM
Did you really win a national contest with this poem? I am greatly impressed, congratulations! It truly is wonderful. I've put you on my favorite list
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Date: 6/26/2011 9:58:00 PM
Very true, I love this poem, not just the thoughts expressed, also the form and structure, suming up its uniqueness. The rhythm maintained my interest, and the rhyme made my read all pleasurable. Thanks for your comment, Elizabeth, and keep writing.
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:53:00 PM
Double 7 plus to you on this smooth write, Elizabeth. I liiiiike. :-)
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Date: 6/25/2011 1:33:00 AM
Interesting tale, well told. I think I have been in that band of pilgrims sometimes! Nice one. Love, Robert.
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Date: 6/24/2011 4:02:00 PM
"back to the place where the beginning was found"...how I love this expression, a beautiful write, both of them today, thanks, Rich
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