Pilgrim Lips

devout pilgrim lips
in discovery's journey
leave love offerings
sacred shrines of her body
devotion's recipients

Jade Celeste

sensualtanka

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Richard Lamoureux

March 28, 2015 at 8:29 AM

As I read this piece yesterday my system crashed. I'm pleased it is back up this morning. I just love your cool moving picture, it fits perfectly with this passionate piece.

Hannington Mumo

March 28, 2015 at 1:38 AM

I thoroughly like this piece. Keep it up!

Nette Onclaud

March 27, 2015 at 3:56 PM

sultry though subtly passionate in tone, jade... just simply aflame!.. nice job!.. huggs

Eve Roper

March 27, 2015 at 12:28 PM

Jade, beautiful romantic tanka, a seven for this performance. Blessings dear friend Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 27, 2015 at 4:27 AM

- Sensually and beautiful, dear Eileen - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

March 27, 2015 at 11:27 AM

Thanks, Sunshine. Wishing you the same! :) Hugs

Jan Allison

March 27, 2015 at 2:53 AM

wonderful Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison

March 27, 2015 at 3:05 AM

I have struggled with this form Eileen I started about 7 for Andrea's contest just couldn't get the twist - finally penned one at the 11th hour and got the last space in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

March 27, 2015 at 3:02 AM

Saw a lot of tankas going around. This one needs tweaking, but I was in a rush. Thanks, sweetie. Hugs to you