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devout pilgrim lips in discovery's journey leave love offerings sacred shrines of her body devotion's recipients Jade Celeste

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/28/2015 8:29:00 AM
As I read this piece yesterday my system crashed. I'm pleased it is back up this morning. I just love your cool moving picture, it fits perfectly with this passionate piece.
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Date: 3/28/2015 1:38:00 AM
I thoroughly like this piece. Keep it up!
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Date: 3/27/2015 3:56:00 PM
sultry though subtly passionate in tone, jade... just simply aflame!.. nice job!.. huggs
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Date: 3/27/2015 12:28:00 PM
Jade, beautiful romantic tanka, a seven for this performance. Blessings dear friend Eve
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Date: 3/27/2015 4:27:00 AM
- Sensually and beautiful, dear Eileen - I wish you a beautiful weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/27/2015 11:27:00 AM
Thanks, Sunshine. Wishing you the same! :) Hugs
Date: 3/27/2015 4:12:00 AM
You wonderful people just amaze me. My beautiful seductive Enchantess your words so few so perfect evoke such deep passion. Your ability to create beauty in so many poetic forms leaves me feeling like a child just learning to tie my shoe laces. I have spent four hours writing twelve words of a Tanka that cannot stand in the same room as that which flows so freely from your pen. You are passionate genius! You have my love and my adoration dear friend. Love Shane xxx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/27/2015 11:31:00 AM
Hello, Shane. Thanks for your lovely post on my work. You sell yourself short, my dear. I am no genius...and YOU can write a better one than this. You do give me a boost of confidence. Bless you. Hugs
Date: 3/27/2015 2:53:00 AM
wonderful Eileen:-) hugs Jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 3/27/2015 3:05:00 AM
I have struggled with this form Eileen I started about 7 for Andrea's contest just couldn't get the twist - finally penned one at the 11th hour and got the last space in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/27/2015 3:02:00 AM
Saw a lot of tankas going around. This one needs tweaking, but I was in a rush. Thanks, sweetie. Hugs to you
Date: 3/27/2015 2:21:00 AM
Wow, hot!!!!:-)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/27/2015 3:01:00 AM
Hot....best way to be, dear. Thanks for the visit. Hugs