"O' I so need to give poetry up" . . . lol
Life is bloody amazing up here; I have never seen such a view I have just wet my knickers, and I am about to follow through I would have coped better; if only, I had known, I can really fly But as I so accidentally fell off a cliff this really was my first try Farmer McLeod is having kittens; he has just lost his prize pig But I’m up here doing skydives, and couldn’t give a friggin’ fig You can take back all the rumours; that pigs in reality can’t fly But just hold on there isn't that pig poop you have in your eye
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