Pietà

A lifeless body,
Chiseled from divinity:
Draped in mother’s arms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Strand Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 11:49 PM
A gorgeous sculture in words Raul.Rgds Brian & thank you for your welcome comments today
Golden Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 5:38 PM
You and Ruben have made an extraordinary pair of bookends with your lovely pieces today. Bravo! Love, Donna
Chircop Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 1:50 PM
i picture Jesus in the hands of his MOther Mary..amen Raul..beautiful..inspirational too-Charma
Freeman Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 11:27 AM
I receive a picture of Christ's body after crucifixtion as his mother held his lifeless body, Raul. Is this your intention? Sincerely, Moses
Gass Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 10:46 AM
Beautifullly penned, Raul! A brilliant display of your artistry and one of my favs! Love, Robin
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 10:29 AM
Speechless. Love, Carol
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:24 AM
Described so perfectly. "Chiseled from divinity" ....what a wonderful line! ~
Gorelick Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:18 AM
You just keep rolling along. I love this. BG
Culverhouse Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 6:56 AM
great!
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 3:58 AM
Good job. Keep writing. Sara
Nutter Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 2:46 AM
Perfectly described very visual with few words. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com
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