Pieces To the Puzzle

in free verse poetry there is a wild freedom
one can write like a bird flying in the sky
metaphors can dance like leaves drifting in the wind
similes can twirl, swirl, and whirl . . . 
low case letters and stanza length is optional
it can be one twining poem or broken up
I love the use of fragmented lines
     and some indention to cause a reader to pause
and best of all free verse fits any theme 

but at times I like a form more structured
counting syllables and maybe even rhyming to paint a picture . . . to create a poem sweet to join the puzzle pieces _________________________ November 23, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Pieces to the Puzzle Copyright Protected, ID 19-1200-601-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Free Verse VS Structured sponsor, Line Gauthier First Place
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Ravidas Avatar
December 9, 2019 at 4:53 AM
In the theory of dynamical systems, chaos is a phenomenon in which the behavior of a nonlinear system looks random, despite the fact that it's determined) Great pieces, D.H. Congrats on gold.
Neumann Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 5:29 AM
Congratulations on you win. I go for the middle ground and love structured chaos. Kind wishes, Kai
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Kai, thank you for visiting my poem and for the congratulations, I love the structured chaos too !
Hamilton Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Another write...another win! Congrats Constance on another top win!
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:40 AM
John, thank you so much for the congrats, oh yes, I just keep plugging away and sometimes I win and sometimes I don't but the joy is always in the writing.
Na Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 1:09 AM
Congrats to your winning poem Constance
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:41 AM
Greg, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate !
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 12:00 AM
An impressive and deserving First Place win Constance. Congratulations! xxoo
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment. I truly enjoyed writing this poem for Line and the bonus is that it will be in her book.
Roper Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Wonderful description of the forms, Dear Heart, congratulations on you 1st place win. Hugs
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:42 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and the wonderful, appreciate !
Dietrich Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 7:28 PM
I love the way you "showed" both ways of writing by breaking it up the way you did. A very well deserved first place! Congrats, dear heart.
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats and for the compliment, appreciate !
Adams Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 6:26 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever write... :) hugs
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:43 AM
Sandra, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
Canerdy Avatar
November 28, 2019 at 5:38 PM
Constance, a big CONGRATS on your win! Janice
La France Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 10:44 AM
Janice thank you for the congrats !!!!
May Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 2:13 PM
Again Constance really? This one is for sure going to knock me into getting an N/A, your talent still shining and it always will! Wonderfully done my sweet friend!!
La France Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:39 AM
Bobby, thank you for the great compliment and visit !
Lamoureux Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 9:50 AM
For me my free verse tends to turn to rhyme. I like how you wrote this one and the shapes.
La France Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting !
Na Avatar
November 23, 2019 at 8:54 AM
Well done Constance. Best of luck to you in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
La France Avatar
November 24, 2019 at 9:40 AM
Greg, thanks so much for the compliment !
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