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Pieces To the Puzzle

in free verse poetry there is a wild freedom one can write like a bird flying in the sky metaphors can dance like leaves drifting in the wind similes can twirl, swirl, and whirl . . . low case letters and stanza length is optional it can be one twining poem or broken up I love the use of fragmented lines and some indention to cause a reader to pause and best of all free verse fits any theme
but at times I like a form more structured
counting syllables and maybe even rhyming to paint a picture . . . to create a poem sweet to join the puzzle pieces _________________________ November 23, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Pieces to the Puzzle Copyright Protected, ID 19-1200-601-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Free Verse VS Structured sponsor, Line Gauthier First Place

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Date: 12/9/2019 4:53:00 AM
In the theory of dynamical systems, chaos is a phenomenon in which the behavior of a nonlinear system looks random, despite the fact that it's determined) Great pieces, D.H. Congrats on gold.
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Date: 12/1/2019 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on you win. I go for the middle ground and love structured chaos. Kind wishes, Kai
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:37:00 AM
Kai, thank you for visiting my poem and for the congratulations, I love the structured chaos too !
Date: 11/29/2019 9:41:00 AM
Another write...another win! Congrats Constance on another top win!
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Date: 12/1/2019 10:40:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the congrats, oh yes, I just keep plugging away and sometimes I win and sometimes I don't but the joy is always in the writing.
Date: 11/29/2019 1:09:00 AM
Congrats to your winning poem Constance
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:41:00 AM
Greg, thank you so much for the congrats, appreciate !
Date: 11/29/2019 12:00:00 AM
An impressive and deserving First Place win Constance. Congratulations! xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:42:00 AM
Connie, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment. I truly enjoyed writing this poem for Line and the bonus is that it will be in her book.
Date: 11/28/2019 9:38:00 PM
Wonderful description of the forms, Dear Heart, congratulations on you 1st place win. Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:42:00 AM
Eve, thank you so much for the congratulations and the wonderful, appreciate !
Date: 11/28/2019 7:28:00 PM
I love the way you "showed" both ways of writing by breaking it up the way you did. A very well deserved first place! Congrats, dear heart.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:43:00 AM
Andrea, thank you so much for the congrats and for the compliment, appreciate !
Date: 11/28/2019 6:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this clever write... :) hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:43:00 AM
Sandra, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment !
Date: 11/28/2019 5:38:00 PM
Constance, a big CONGRATS on your win! Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 12/1/2019 10:44:00 AM
Janice thank you for the congrats !!!!
Date: 11/23/2019 2:13:00 PM
Again Constance really? This one is for sure going to knock me into getting an N/A, your talent still shining and it always will! Wonderfully done my sweet friend!!
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Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2019 9:39:00 AM
Bobby, thank you for the great compliment and visit !
Date: 11/23/2019 9:50:00 AM
For me my free verse tends to turn to rhyme. I like how you wrote this one and the shapes.
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Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2019 9:40:00 AM
Richard, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting !
Date: 11/23/2019 8:54:00 AM
Well done Constance. Best of luck to you in the contest. Thanks for sharing. Happy Thanksgiving
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Constance La France
Date: 11/24/2019 9:40:00 AM
Greg, thanks so much for the compliment !

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