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Pieces of a Puzzle

Pieces of a Puzzle

a jigsaw puzzle
scattered on a table top…
pieces of my life

06-26-2015

Contest:      Senryu on Your Existence
Sponsor:     Marvin Celestial
Placement:  3rd

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John Michaels

February 25, 2017 at 4:38 AM

A little piece this one... hope you are in a better place now. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

February 25, 2017 at 7:35 PM

John, thank you so much for swinging by to congratulate me on this piece! I really appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

John Michaels

February 25, 2017 at 4:39 AM

That should be "a sad little piece"...

Eric Boddie

July 31, 2015 at 5:43 PM

now I could put you together....I am a mathematician so my mind is better....equipped to solve puzzles as well as complex problems....because no problem is too hard when you use Love to solve them....;)

Eric Boddie

July 31, 2015 at 7:44 PM

well I am the best math tutor this side of the sun....lol....but seriously math is what fuels my poetry....;)

Pandita Sietesantos

July 31, 2015 at 7:19 PM

Well, you got me there, Eric!:-) Even though I am pretty good at solving jigsaw puzzles, I always wished I was better at math and was a better problem-solver! But, I love your point - many difficult problems can be solved with some L-O-V-E! That's right, my friend!!!! Take care, Eric! Pandita

Suzanne Delaney

July 21, 2015 at 4:30 PM

So true...we fit the puzzle of our life together as we go...beautifully expressed. SuZ

Pandita Sietesantos

July 24, 2015 at 8:58 PM

Hi Suzanne, you're so sweet for leaving me this lovely compliment. Thank you kindly! Pandita

Duke Beaufort

July 12, 2015 at 6:33 AM

Well, a way to look at my life too. This will give me this morning's reflection. Perhaps I can come up with a better way to put it all together. Very interesting! Thank-you again!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 12, 2015 at 9:44 PM

Thank you for stopping by, Duke! I appreciate your visit and kind comments which is very much appreciated! All the best to you. Pandita

Paul Callus

July 5, 2015 at 2:49 PM

Congratulations on your deserved win, Pandita! Hope you manage to join all the pieces together:) // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

July 5, 2015 at 7:02 PM

Many thanks, dear Paul. You know how tricky life can be - sometimes we get them right sometimes we don't:-); but we just keep trying! All the best, Pandita

Eve Roper

July 4, 2015 at 12:14 PM

Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:25 PM

Hi Eve, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your wonderful compliments and high rating! Hope you and your family are enjoying a this Fourth of July weekend! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

July 4, 2015 at 8:41 AM

I see this one is a winner! I so enjoyed reading it again.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:33 PM

Thank you so much, Rick, for swinging back to congratulate me on this piece! I really appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Barbara Gorelick

July 4, 2015 at 8:36 AM

My favorite.....congrats.. This is awesome. BG

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:32 PM

Hi Barbara, thank you for your inspiring high compliments and I am happy you enjoyed this piece! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 3, 2015 at 10:25 PM

How true and well penned Pandita, congrats on ur win!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 12:52 AM

Hi Dr. Upma, thank you so much for your continued support and kind words. Have a great weekend! Pandita

Kim Merryman

July 3, 2015 at 8:51 PM

Great analogy, Pandita! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 12:51 AM

Many thanks, dear Kim, for returning with your kind congratulations and compliments! Have a happy Fourth of July! Pandita

Skat A

July 3, 2015 at 6:48 PM

PANDITA, Congratulations on the win. SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 8:23 PM

Hi SKAT A, it's always really nice to hear from you! Thank you for complimenting my work! Warmest regards. Pandita

Constance La France

July 3, 2015 at 6:33 PM

Pandita, oh so beautifully penned, a perfect 10 and thanks for visiting my haiku

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 8:18 PM

Thanks for the visit, my friend, and your kind compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 6:26 PM

Pandita, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 8:22 PM

Hi Linda, thank you once again for circling back with your congratulations which I very much appreciate! Hope you enjoy the weekend! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2015 at 4:54 PM

this is one of the best on the list. Congrats on your win!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 8:20 PM

Hi Andie, thank you so much for returning to congratulate me on this piece! I really appreciate it. Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

John Lawless

July 3, 2015 at 9:52 AM

interesting visual presented here Pandita. Very well done.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 1:24 PM

Hi John, thank you so much for the visit and for the lovely compliments and continued support! Have a nice weekend! Pandita

Matthew Anish

July 2, 2015 at 11:30 PM

Great metaphor here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 1:20 PM

Hi Matthew, thanks for stopping by and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! I enjoy reading your works. Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

July 2, 2015 at 9:22 PM

my box came with 100 pieces and I only see 50 we tend to loose pieces as we go, enjoyed this one *luv p.d.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 12:26 PM

That is such a true comment about life - many times pieces get lost along the way and then we have to have faith and creatively face the challenges in our path. Thanks, Linda for visiting and for the wonderful support. Enjoy the weekend! Pandita

Honestly J.T.

July 2, 2015 at 9:17 PM

all the world's a stage. Good poem -JT

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 12:18 PM

Dear JT, I thank you kindly for leaving me this sweet compliment. Enjoy a great weekend! Pandita

Milton Robertson

July 2, 2015 at 8:52 AM

Short, sweet and so true. putting them together is the challenge of Life.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 3, 2015 at 12:16 PM

Hi Milton, thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your wonderful compliments! Have an equally wonderful weekend, my friend! Pandita

Arthur Vaso

July 1, 2015 at 9:18 PM

Wow, now that was very good!!!!!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 1, 2015 at 9:23 PM

Hi Arthur, thank you kindly for your superlative compliment that makes me quite happy!! Yeah! Pandita

Sara Kendrick

July 1, 2015 at 2:08 PM

Creative work..Enjoyed the pieces of a life scattered..Thanks for droping by.Sara

Pandita Sietesantos

July 1, 2015 at 9:21 PM

Dear Sara, I am so happy to hear from you and thank you for your wonderful compliments and encouragement! Have a beautiful day! Pandita

Kamran Rashid

July 1, 2015 at 12:44 PM

SOUNDS lightening,,,and i got it like someone is telling me to not stop and read it and remeber fr ever..ty fr ua time on my poem #lookin forward to read more --learn more;;;love@krb

Pandita Sietesantos

July 1, 2015 at 9:19 PM

Hi Kamran, thanks for stopping by and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! I'll be reading more of your works. Warmest regards. Pandita

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

July 1, 2015 at 9:14 AM

Pandita, clever take !!! ~Olive Eloisa

Pandita Sietesantos

July 1, 2015 at 9:17 PM

Thanks for the visit, Olive and your kind compliment! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

June 30, 2015 at 10:15 PM

I really like this one, Pandita. Hey, did I ever tell you. One of my nicnames is Andie pandie. That would make me pandita in the affectionate form!!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 1, 2015 at 9:16 PM

I am so happy you like this piece, Andrea! Awwww - and I am really tickled by your nickname that is so close to my name:-)! Take care! From one Pandita to another:-)