Debbie Guzzi Poet Verse

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Gathering odd bits and scattered pieces
I lay on silken sheets of pristine white,
a soft, lavender scent, aired, releases ...
daily sorrows and fears of painful night.
Rising on an astral cord, I hover
all smiling at my earthly nascent self,
wandering, wondering, fractals a glow 
we light beings uncover
a unifying geometry ourselves.
Do come, come and join our playful tableau.

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Poet Destroyer A March 16, 2013 at 12:26 PM Debbie, this is a nice winning poem... many congrats on this wonder piece of piece.. ;-) always~ PD

Joyce Johnson March 14, 2013 at 7:32 PM Very pretty Debbie. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Roy Jerden March 14, 2013 at 6:53 PM Debbie, a perfect illustration of a death or near death experience, I presume! Excellent! Congratulations!

Richard D Seal March 14, 2013 at 6:01 PM Congratulations in the contest Debbie, you wrote a very playful piece here, enjoyed it. Thanks for your comment on mine, yes too many lonely people. Take care, Regards Richard

Donna Jones March 14, 2013 at 3:57 PM Beautiful poem Debbie, congratulations

Connie Gildersleeve March 14, 2013 at 2:25 PM Debbie congratulation on your fine poem. Thanks for your advice on 'What do you make of this?'. much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 14, 2013 at 10:13 AM Many congrats luv xx

Joseph May March 14, 2013 at 9:36 AM congrats on a fine win..

Carrie Richards March 14, 2013 at 9:30 AM Your words are never ordinary or average.......always steller and beautiful! This is no exception!

Painted Hunter March 14, 2013 at 9:09 AM Always so eloquent, Debbie...Congrats!

Andrea Dietrich March 10, 2013 at 12:46 AM I am thinking this is someone just "soul traveling" Do you believe in it, Debs? It is something that I heard some people can do and I really would love to know how to myself!! So interesting how you made lavender be the fragrance of your spirit!

Poet Destroyer A March 9, 2013 at 4:03 PM DG, this is a good poem... let the light shine...PD

Anne-Lise Andresen March 9, 2013 at 11:34 AM A good poem to this contest, Debbie! - Good luck. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl March 9, 2013 at 4:25 AM Hi there oh cool one, like this one , I 'll think about joining your playful tableau though, xx

Eileen Manassian March 8, 2013 at 10:36 PM What a delightful choice of words, Debbie! :) Captivating....

Russell Sivey March 8, 2013 at 8:59 PM This is a fabulous write my friend! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this evening, quite the enjoyable poem! What an enlightening piece, Great Work!! PS I will write a poem for your contest as soon as I'm sufficiently inspired, I want a good one for you!

Michelle Mac Donald March 8, 2013 at 7:09 PM Astral flights Debs? Vistas and visits sometimes just a flight of fancy where one will "come and join our playful tableau". I'm not certain if they will vanquish those "daily sorrows and fears of painful night" but I'm sure they can give some form of reassurance and relief. Feels bitter-sweet, Debs. So wishing you the best.....Love, Mikki