Pieces

Everyone wants a piece of me…
that’s what a large part of life
is.  Wife, children, friends and
neighbors – little love bites for 
attention~ the cats.  And what
matters most, at the end of a 
day, a life? – instead of left whole 
I would rather have been fondly
portioned out, a good taste left on the sampling 
palates of acquaintances. Relationships are
more triangles than circles...a
few pointed edges, pricked as
we go round one another.  In mine
at the centers real hearts....
Squares not pointed enough, 
and circles rather boring. 
Pieces are portions and portions
once an entire pie.  Apples, 
cinnamon and lots of brown sugar -- 
what the heck!  Sweets are great
preservatives….  Maybe in charge
of bakeries my destiny if flavorful 
decadence occasionally allowed in 
the Here-after?  I mean, if castles 
and pavement of gold, why not pastries?
Do dentists ever make it to heaven?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 6:08 AM
This is a write to bite..Into maybe a little Hard to digest..Burrrp.' wheew need to get stuff off your chest..A piece of the mind..Of Joe Dimino I find eclectic almost electric, sort of rough edged yet also fine.'
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 9:31 AM
Hi Joe; thank you. A little slice of life, most of us can relate to at times, but a write merely to lightly ponder and perhaps induce a smile. Have a great writing day my friend.
Empress Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:32 AM
The last line made me smile! Hahah! Not something I get to read everyday! How unique! Left a smile on my face! I love your mention of cats! I love cats Do you have cats? what breed are they? You always write from your heart. And I absolutely love reading you whenever I can ~ The flow and the way youv expressed is just seamless Pleasure visiting you today Sending you light always 🍃
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 3:51 AM
Hi Empress; thank you. Just mixed breeds, strays who came to the door I took in. 2 left, that I have had for about 13 years, since they were kittens. A Calico and Ginger, Mamma and Lover. I'm not really a pet person, but those big beautiful, needed eyes...I am owned by them. They treat me good.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 6, 2026 at 10:49 PM
I suppose denteists have a chance to go to heaven. I'll ask my grandson.
DiMino Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 3:54 AM
Yea, all the anxiety and pain they cause! But, like on earth, if candy and pastries, definitely they are needed in heaven, spiritual cavities my guess? Just a fun write...I really greatly admire my dentist, a job I could not do. Blessings my friend.
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