Pie

Pie is for your dessert Pumpkin pie was just baked Pan still hot-don't get burned Power sugar on top Pour a cup of coffee Prayer thank you-amen Pounce before it gets cold. Date Written:4/7/2021 Note:Checked with Howmanysyllables Pleiades P Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/19/2021 2:36:00 PM

A tribute to pumpkin pie - love it - great inspiration to write as well. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/20/2021 9:41:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. It was an honor to have a win. Yes, a tribute to pumpkin pie. Glad you love it. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/14/2021 2:36:00 PM

Ahh!! Almost makes me want a slice even though it is not my favorite. Congrats on your win. Sara

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/16/2021 8:15:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Sorry it is not your favorite pie but glad you like the write. Have a blessed day.......................

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 7:18:00 AM

- Pie is not so common with us ... I do not think I have tasted it - Congratulations on your lovely win, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/13/2021 8:43:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. So glad you like this pie write. Have a blessed day with hugs.......................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:39:00 PM

what a cute last line to pounce on it!! Congrats. Some pies are so delicious

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/13/2021 8:41:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like my Pumpkin pie write. Yes, pounce before it gets cold. Have a blessed day.......................

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:21:00 PM

Paula, a delicious write! This would have been great at Thanksgiving! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/13/2021 8:40:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in your contest. Glad you like my Pumpkin pie write. It was a fun write. Have a blessed day.......................

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2021 1:34:00 AM

Your pie is very tempting, Paula! Probably I'm too late to even taste a crumb :) GL in the contest. Warm regards // paul

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/11/2021 11:03:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this Pumpkin pie write. Sorry, all gone. Have a blessed day.......................

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/9/2021 11:58:00 AM

Best of luck Paul, a superb write and most definitely a win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2021 11:08:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/weekend with hugs.......................

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/9/2021 11:35:00 AM

Truly pleasing to the taste buds dear Paul. Pie is my favorite dessert :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2021 11:07:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Yes, pie is a favorite dessert for many. Glad you like my hot pie write. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/9/2021 11:02:00 AM

Delicious "P' words Paula. All the best.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/10/2021 11:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my hot pie write. Have a blessed day/weekend.......................

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/8/2021 10:53:00 PM

Love your Pie Paula, and the poetry. good luck in contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this hot pie write. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/8/2021 2:48:00 PM

I never let pie get cold, in fact I usually burn my tongue because I can't wait! Fun entry for the contest, Paula~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2021 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like this pie write. Yes, I have burned my tongue a time or to. Warm pie is the best. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/8/2021 1:38:00 PM

Very nice verses for the p-Pleiades; I wish you good luck in the contest..., have a blessed afternoon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/9/2021 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day writing away.......................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2021 7:44:00 AM

Ha ha, you said it all, brilliant work, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2021 11:32:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Oh!!! you gave me a brilliant. "Thanks" Have a blessed day writing away........................

Eve Roper

Date: 4/7/2021 9:10:00 PM

Cute verse, Paula. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2021 11:30:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Have a blessed day with hug........................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/7/2021 4:28:00 PM

Pie, pour, prayer, pounce...mmm

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/8/2021 11:28:00 AM

Thanks for your note. Let's eat....... Have a blessed day........................