Pictures of the Past

The stilled portrait tells of a past
A past where the painted girl in blue ran wild
Dandelions clutched in her small fists
A penny in a wishing well
Her ear pressed to a conch
Wanting
Hoping
Needing to know you really could hear the ocean
In Arizona

And the red paint handprint
Told of a day when she held her breath
To quiet her fear
When a bumblebee landed 
On her cinnamon dusted nose.
And when she couldn’t stay still any longer
It simply flew away.

A discarded photograph on her bed
Shows two girls laughing and posing
For the awaited flash
Ice cream on the back porch days
Melted strawberry Chapstick 
Always in their pockets
Because the cherry tasted like cough syrup.

A grainy Polaroid pinned to the wall
Full of barely visible faces
You could tell she liked to experiment
With boys, looks, and friendships
Heavy lidded eyes and a
Dark color scheme
Mouth frozen in a smirk
Earring made of fake crystal
Purple dyed curls
Arm around the girl on the porch
At a different stage of life

A desktop background,
Brightly lit
Taken in a school hallway
A blonde and a red-head
One hand on his shoulder
His lips pressed to her cheek
Both smiling
Eyes closed 
Her guard was down
Her hair like a waterfall
And his hand in hers

A picture slipped between pages of a book
Capturing a torrential downpour
Of graduation caps
Black polyester against
White cotton clouds and a silver-blue sky
And you can almost hear the cheers
Celebrating an old end and
A new beginning.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/27/2017 4:24:00 AM
So beautiful, sososososo beautiful! I have no words for this Iris, this is pure poetry, and the imagery is insanely good.
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Iris Blade
Date: 4/27/2017 3:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, comments like yours make my day. I am really happy you enjoyed it. With this poem I tried to consider the saying 'A picture is worth a thousand words.' while not quite a thousand, I did enjoy describing the images.
Date: 4/26/2017 4:45:00 PM
This poem is extremely deep and incredibly creative. Feels as if it has come from a familiar place, a genuine tint to this. The red handprint, the melted cherry chapstick, the conch shell listening for the ocean in Arizona. This just blew me away Iris. What a fantastic piece of writing. Very, very nice.
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Date: 4/27/2017 3:17:00 PM
Thank you so much! I love how supportive Poetry Soup members are, especially you, Chris Green. This poem wasn't exactly my story, but it was inspired by such. I do call Arizona my home, I love the beach, and when I was growing up my mother did one handprit a year as a record of how much we had grown. I included some aspects familiar to who I am, and other pieces to this story are ones told to me. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!
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