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Picture This

I'm going to paint a picture,
Not with paint or colored chalk.
I'm going to paint a picture
In just the way, I talk.

Got to use some colorful words
Like chronicle, hordes and heeds.
Words that smell and taste and hear,
It's like growing a garden from seeds.

Poetry is more than words on paper.
It must show the reader the entire scheme.
So their minds can see it so clearly
And it reads just like a dream!


Now to practice what I preach!

allusioncolorcreationdreamfeelingsrhyme

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Joseph Spence Sr

July 16, 2021 at 10:40 PM

Congratulations, and excellent poem, Virginia. I love the flow of the words and the impact of the message. I am very proud of you and your poetic proliferation. The descriptive excellence is lovely and sends terrific images. The theme of "Picture" stands out, and the tone moves the piece down the page with much grace. Great job! Have a fantastic day, and God's richest grace and blessings to you always. –Professor, Ambassador, Dr. Joseph S. Spence Sr. (Epulaeryu Master)!

Alexis Y.

June 8, 2021 at 9:10 AM

WoW! Virginia, What a good take on what “ poetry “ does and is. This is poetry indeed. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Virginia Gelok

June 8, 2021 at 5:07 PM

Thanks so much. I'm working hard trying to to "Walk the Talk" as the saying goes. I know what I should do but have to become more descriptive I believe.