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Picture Perfect Family

Easter morning
Nineteen fifties 
Black and white 
Edged in gray 
Pyramid like
Stepping stones
Determined by age and height
Reminiscent of the glories of Cleopatra
Stand silhouetted within
Easter’s sunny orbit

The Ideal family with fixed smiles
Returns the viewers’ gaze
Light enters
The shutter clicks
Kidnapping the treasured moment  
Mom and dad 
Bookend eldest daughter
Twin-like reflections of
Younger brothers stand at mid-point
Youngest daughter becomes
The monument’s foundation

Picture perfect in Easter finery 
Chapeaus are draped in crushed netting
Brimming with bright flowers and multi-colored berries
Suit coats hold crisp white shirts and striped ties
Tiny purses dangle from wrists
Fixed Colgate-like smiles
Return the viewer’s gaze
Commemorating, witnessing, rejoicing
What is for who will come

Shoulder to shoulder they stand
Planets spiraling bumping, clashing
Yet staying in orbit
Generations may wonder
At the story being told
Does the little girl rue standing alone?
Or is it her statement?
Why not the oldest?
Leaving the parents together?
Must the brothers move glued as one through eternity?
Will each find a place in the firmament?
Will eternity claim the parents first?
Will a younger moon precede?

Frear not
As Gods’s heavens circumscribe
The position of the moon and stars.
Creation’s order begets love and benevolence
Tradition is reward and
Source material
For nature’s anomalies

 

Every Easter it was our family tradition to take a picture of the six of us before church.  It was often taken on the steps of our family home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/23/2016 4:29:00 PM
I especially love the 2nd stanza with its vivid description of the photograph - kidnapping the treasured moment... what a gem of a phrase. Lovely family tradition i do like your unique writing style maybe one day i will write free verse as beautifully as this:-) hugs jan xx
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 11/23/2016 7:14:00 PM
That is so sweet. Thank you, Jan! I, in turn, admire the discipline of those who can write sonnets etc. Hugs back to you, Jan
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Kathleen Kroll
Date: 11/23/2016 7:12:00 PM
That is so sweet. Thank you, Jan! I, in turn, admire the discipline of those who can write sonnets etc. Hugs back to you, Jan

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