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Picture of Bleeding Words

Many voices play in my head trying to overcome what was declared; knots of blaming words litter hazy thoughts in cracks of evening as I plead for silence. But a litany of defenses grinds on as I blindly look up, framing a starlight to assuage this deep tug of anguish. There is still to learn from a life where own feelings are not heard, a lament within my mouth closing each time you explode, unaware of my need for some respect-- yes, I am just a young lad so used to fatherly commands which drain me like a wounded, street animal being reproached without fairness--- and only you must bear the consequence when I free these hands, screaming back until we both bleed. Poems that paint a picture Contest by Silent One Sept 9, 2017

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Date: 9/13/2017 7:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Banjo with this creative poem!
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Date: 9/13/2017 9:14:00 AM
Banjo congratulations on your win
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Date: 9/13/2017 6:29:00 AM
very deep imagery.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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