Picnics At the Park

Picnics at the Park

I wished that I had stopped
The hands of Mother Clock
From ticking on its tac
As time flew by steadfast.

Bye, bye my toddler sweet
Hello there little princess
New adventures you'll seek
Words small and big you'll speak.

You're so confident at three
A daredevil I could see
Climbing, jumping, hopping
In every closet, hiding.

First time I saw you biked
With training wheels unlatched
Made your Grandma so proud
Love tears bedewed her eyes.

At four you got bolder
Your bike rides went farther
Your hollers were like fireflies
Which I chased them from afar.

Though dusk had already fallen
You're still roamin' in the gloamin'
A guard brought you back alone
Told him 3324 Park St., was your home.

You loved picnics at age five
On the grass, we laid our mat
Admiringly I watched you biked
With your cool sunglasses and hat.

One day when you're past five
Moved miles away I couldn't drive
How I wished that I had stopped
Before. The tic tacs of Mother Clock!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 6/2/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thank you Darren White for your nice comment. Thank you also for your welcome!
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Date: 6/3/2017 3:07:00 AM
You are welcome :)
Date: 6/1/2017 2:03:00 AM
What a sweet, gentle, and very moving, loving poem you have written. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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