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Picnic Footle 1247

Picnic delight,
Flies bite.

Sunny spot,
Too hot.

Forgot chairs,
Who cares.

Sit on ground, 
Prickles found.

Clouds form, 
Not warm.

Rain you get, 
Very wet.

Call Rover, 
Picnic over.

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Ink Empress October 7, 2023 at 9:16 PM Call rover picnic over hah! I love this, the reality of some picnics so well written! Absolutely love this one! Congrats on your win Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:40 PM Empress thank you so much .. and sorry for the delay in responding.

Karen Jones October 7, 2023 at 8:59 PM Back with congrats on your win! Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:41 PM Dear Karen, thanks so much. I am honored that you are reading my poems. Sorry for the delay in responding.

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2023 at 11:37 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:42 PM Thanks so much Sara. I finally found time during my Granddaughters visit to answer. Best wishes.

Mystic Rose Rose October 7, 2023 at 3:39 AM Sweet love the short bursts of vision I get when I read this, thank you for sharing dear poet :) Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:43 PM thank you so much Mystic Rose. I am glad you liked it. Sorry for the delay in responding.

Bill Baker October 6, 2023 at 8:42 PM I always enjoy reading the Footles of those few poets that a good at writing them like you are, SV. Hope you're enjoying the visiting family, my friend, we miss you. Hugs, Bill Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:48 PM Oh Bill, I found out that the lovely Sara is your wife. If you don't mind me saying " you are both so lucky to each have found such special people." Thanks for your comment on my humble footles. Sorry it took so long to reply.

Victor Buhagiar October 6, 2023 at 8:31 AM Darn the rain. It spoilt everything. Blessings. Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:57 PM lol it was a fun write Victor. Thanks for your comment. Sorry for the delay in my reply. Hope your health is still improving.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 6, 2023 at 1:12 AM - A fun one, S.V. ... well done :) - hugs Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:58 PM Yup it was fun. Thank you for your comment sweet one. Always appreciated. Sorry for the delay in answering.

Karen Jones October 5, 2023 at 10:02 PM Ha! Cute Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 1:59 PM Karen thank you for commenting to let me know you liked it.. Best wishes to you and my apologies for the long delay in responding.

Sam Scott October 5, 2023 at 9:51 PM I like the simplicity of this yet it does perfectly capture nearly every picnic I have ever had :) Pristine and precise. Adorable. Speaks Volumes October 21, 2023 at 2:01 PM Lol oh Sam I am so grateful for your comments. With my granddaughter visiting from America, I have been pushed for time to reply in a timely manner, please forgive me. So glad you like my little thoughts.