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Picnic Footle 1247

Picnic delight,
Flies bite.

Sunny spot,
Too hot.

Forgot chairs,
Who cares.

Sit on ground, 
Prickles found.

Clouds form, 
Not warm.

Rain you get, 
Very wet.

Call Rover, 
Picnic over.

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Ink Empress Date: 10/7/2023 9:16:00 PM Call rover picnic over hah! I love this, the reality of some picnics so well written! Absolutely love this one! Congrats on your win Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:40:00 PM Empress thank you so much .. and sorry for the delay in responding.

Karen Jones Date: 10/7/2023 8:59:00 PM Back with congrats on your win! Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:41:00 PM Dear Karen, thanks so much. I am honored that you are reading my poems. Sorry for the delay in responding.

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/7/2023 11:37:00 AM Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:42:00 PM Thanks so much Sara. I finally found time during my Granddaughters visit to answer. Best wishes.

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 10/7/2023 3:39:00 AM Sweet love the short bursts of vision I get when I read this, thank you for sharing dear poet :) Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:43:00 PM thank you so much Mystic Rose. I am glad you liked it. Sorry for the delay in responding.

Bill Baker Date: 10/6/2023 8:42:00 PM I always enjoy reading the Footles of those few poets that a good at writing them like you are, SV. Hope you're enjoying the visiting family, my friend, we miss you. Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:48:00 PM Oh Bill, I found out that the lovely Sara is your wife. If you don't mind me saying " you are both so lucky to each have found such special people." Thanks for your comment on my humble footles. Sorry it took so long to reply.

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/6/2023 8:31:00 AM Darn the rain. It spoilt everything. Blessings. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:57:00 PM lol it was a fun write Victor. Thanks for your comment. Sorry for the delay in my reply. Hope your health is still improving.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/6/2023 1:12:00 AM - A fun one, S.V. ... well done :) - hugs Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:58:00 PM Yup it was fun. Thank you for your comment sweet one. Always appreciated. Sorry for the delay in answering.

Karen Jones Date: 10/5/2023 10:02:00 PM Ha! Cute Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 1:59:00 PM Karen thank you for commenting to let me know you liked it.. Best wishes to you and my apologies for the long delay in responding.

Sam Scott Date: 10/5/2023 9:51:00 PM I like the simplicity of this yet it does perfectly capture nearly every picnic I have ever had :) Pristine and precise. Adorable. Login to Reply Speaks Volumes Date: 10/21/2023 2:01:00 PM Lol oh Sam I am so grateful for your comments. With my granddaughter visiting from America, I have been pushed for time to reply in a timely manner, please forgive me. So glad you like my little thoughts.