Pickles and Tickles Fast Food.

We cook it ! Feel your tonsils tingle!
Add mayonnaise, lettuce, a pickle.
Lost both tonsils at ten
so can I ask you when
my change comes to more than a nickle?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 17, 2010 at 10:43 AM
Gerard, Very late on my congratulations,, Shame on me.. better late than never. Had fun reading all entries.. CONGRATULTIONS once again... always,..p.d.
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November 15, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Hey, way to go, Gerard. I like your meter of your fun limerick. Cngratulatlons on your win. Andrea
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November 15, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in pd's contest with this fine Limerick >> James
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November 15, 2010 at 10:22 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard in P D's contest "Pickles & Tickles *Limerick*". Love, Carol
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November 15, 2010 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your fine entry. Agape, Moses
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November 14, 2010 at 8:02 AM
Congrats Gerard my friend on your big win in P.D.'s contst with this wonderful entry ..tasty ..too... enjoy your sweet victory and success this happy football Sunday ... GO GIANTS... what else can a "Sweetheart" ask for but a giant win..?? luv.
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November 14, 2010 at 6:28 AM
Congrats..Sara
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November 14, 2010 at 4:44 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Gerard
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October 23, 2010 at 9:34 PM
An interesting little limerick, Gerard. Good luck in the contest. I don't think this one got judged yet, did it? Nice seeing you here tonight. LUv,Andrea
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October 21, 2010 at 8:24 PM
Interesting write, Gerard. I'm not quite sure I get all of it regarding the tonsils and the nickel. Good luck in the contest. Dan C
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October 12, 2010 at 11:47 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Gerard. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
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