Pickled Raspberry Musings

Caged magnetic daydreams of lucid migration;

I’ve been there before.  It’s forbidden:

Orchard carved calligraphy crisply cut -
Spiraled surface-scratched immortality 
Dimly azure, aglow on videotape,
Red, blue, green.  Nature’s baby grand.
An organic player-piano ceaseless 
In mellow tone, perched potpourri hillside,
Plucking raspberry notes of beautiful song; 
Translucent aches nestled by slippy wake
That ricochet ripples, careening whispers
Through rendezvous dreams.
Seductive susurrus, sentient, shadowy,
Teasing temptation longed to taste;
Siren’s breathiness gurgles in devilish dive,  
Swooshes, swoops, swallows.  Tickles.
Siren’s breathless gurgle chokes drowned lies.

But…so serene.  Feather soft tranquility.  

Lyrical folly forbidden.  Salmon pink. 

2/3/2017

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Writer’s note:
Told as a pet parakeet (while his owner listens to Radiohead’s song Videotape) whose cage is hung in the window of a cottage overlooking a stream through an orchard while the sun goes down who was a fish in a past life but, sadly, drowned due to a mental disorder  which caused him to believe he was a bird and, consequently, spend all day trying to fly out of the water…until the day he refused to use his gills to breathe since, after all, birds don’t have gills.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/6/2017 8:25:00 AM
WoW Phillip, I love this :) And all the alliteration, wonderful..
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Date: 2/6/2017 4:56:00 AM
a puzzling description in "the day of a pet's life" done in abstract language.... so imaginative, phillip..huggs
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:29:00 PM
After reading this, my brain is now pickled, Phillip. Extremely nebulous write that tickles a spot in my brain left by the early 70's. I laughed all the way through it:)
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Date: 2/3/2017 3:58:00 PM
Phew. Often I wake up and say "maybe today's the day I can have a tickle fight with a younger version of DT" but until now I always go to bed deprived. :) Thanks Daniel!
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