Pickled Onions

They don't taste the same
as the ones that filled
those big jars which sat 
in a cupboard serving out 
the four week wait.
My mouth still craves
for that first crisp bite, 
the tangy, sweet release
of spicy vinegar as my teeth
cut through the tightly wound 
layers, the sharp burst
of pleasure, the lingering
after-taste.

Nowadays pickled onions,
like those at the back 
of my fridge, look anemic, 
floating in their pale brine. 
They're soft and soggy.
Oh how I long for 
the pickled onions my Nan
used to make.

It was a ritual every spring.
The jars would be retrieved
from the shed and washed,
a big bag of onions opened
and spread out
on the kitchen table to be
peeled and soaked. 
Malt vinegar bubbled 
its pungent breath from a pot
somersaulting peppercorns
and cloves through its slow churn.
I would help load the jars with
onions before Nan 
would pour the hot vinegar 
into each packed jar. 
Then the wait,
each passing week pestered by 
a …..‘are they ready yet ?’

They were better than candy
for me, a flavor that went way 
beyond taste and deep
into something shared
between us, a love
that found its way to pickle
a little of itself every year
of my childhood.

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Date: 8/20/2024 8:31:00 PM
Beautifl, just beautiful, Paul. You have taken flavor to a new level!
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Paul Willason
Date: 8/28/2024 6:16:00 AM
Thanks Gershon...couldn't do without my pickled stuff. Take care my friend.... Paul
Date: 8/17/2024 9:18:00 AM
what wonderful memories Paul. I am not a pickled onion fan but i can relate to the joys of having something home made rather than some of the products in the shops, hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2024 6:08:00 AM
They were the days when jam making using fruit grown in the backyard and preserving was the norm...adding a dimension to food culture...overtaken by convenience and supply. Can't stop progress I guess. Many thanks for reading the poem and offering yr kind thoughts dear Jan....valued.
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