Picking Flowers Morphed

In the fields as she picks flowers Beauty compounds within the scene She holds them hearing their powers In the fields she picks her flowers They never did seem at all sour Her soul holds them dear as she’s seen In the fields as she picks flowers Beauty compounds within the scene
Russell Sivey Form Triolet
The power of the flowers is extreme It is beautiful to behold their sight The flowers shine amongst the lovely scene Season comes just once, flowers are its right The blooms are brilliant with its color show The flowers don’t look dull they are alright Her soul houses these flowers which she knows Immense are their powers when they are seen The flowers sway as the wind surely blows The power of the flowers are extreme The flowers shine amongst the lovely scene
Russell Sivey Form Terza Rima Entered into Debbie Guzzi's "Metamorph" contest 3/26/2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/1/2013 6:05:00 PM
Russell, Congratulations :-) In Debbie's "Metamorph" contest. always~ PD
Login to Reply
Date: 4/28/2013 10:58:00 AM
Beautiful write Russell... Congrats on your win~A.O
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 7:08:00 PM
Beautiful poem Russell, congrats on your win :D wishing you a wonderful day there :D hug, Yanny
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 4:50:00 PM
Way to go Russell, congratulations.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 3:53:00 PM
Your knowledge and use of forms is growing by leaps and bounds! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 10:59:00 AM
Congratulation Russell, happy they are appreciating your poems. Love Terry xoxo
Login to Reply
Date: 4/25/2013 10:19:00 AM
Many congratulations Russell , well done xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/30/2013 5:51:00 AM
Very good job with this one. I see a lot of change, yet it is in a subtle way the same poem. I like the wording changes with more description and colour added.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 12:40:00 PM
Reads like an interesting contest..Good luck as you go..Thanks for stopping by...Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 3/27/2013 8:41:00 AM
Living flowers is one thing.luving des poem is another.i simply luv it.it has a fragrance.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/26/2013 9:39:00 PM
Russell.....I don't know what form you are talking about but the image of this poem is gorgeous......donna
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter