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Picking Apples

Seasons for apples, apples alone, Red, green, yellow, colours, shades and tone amongst fallen leaves with traits their own, musty smell of autumn so well known! She picked each red with smile so sweet, amidst wide eyed squirrels, robin tweet, although child of nine she was elder, on tow behind her, little brother. He jumped on apples to squash for fun, chased squirrels as fast as he could run, He rolled to change colour with season, was just five, isn't that good reason? a snapshot of moment will endure, for brother, a sister’s love so pure, smile on her face, twinkle in her eye, that autumnal day with crisp blue sky. role she did that mother did entrust, pick apples for sale, day of august, brother was an additional task, a love she would fulfil without ask! both homebound now after a good yield, sister with brother across the field, love and life that day had special show, sunset put season further aglow. mother welcomed her home with such pride, “one day you will be lucky prince’s bride! You took care of your brother so well, Your deep love for him we can all tell.” She smiled in such joyous radiance, she said with looks that spoke in silence, “Apples come and go with each season! but I shall love him - all occasions.” written 29/09/2023 9 syllables each line 8 stanzas of 4 lines each N/A in Apple Picking poetry contest (Robert James Liquori sponsored) Reposted for Brian Strand’s unplaced poetry contest 15/10/23

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Date: 10/1/2023 5:59:00 PM
A lovely poem for the apple picking season, and the sister and brother love too… Belle
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/15/2023 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Belle. Pleased you like it!
Date: 10/1/2023 3:39:00 AM
Aw, such an interesting lovely write... "for brother, a sister's love so pure... ",... how true... enjoyed reading Krishji... How have you been? It's been a very long time since I read your poems as I too was not on here for long... Hope you are doing great. God bless... ~ Ani
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/1/2023 3:56:00 AM
Dear Anitha So nice to hear from you too!! I focussed on other things in life, like daughter’s wedding, travel, well being and was not getting inspiration to write. Back now. Shall look for your poems. do not let go! You write lovely poetry!
Date: 9/29/2023 3:34:00 PM
What a delightful autumn poem Krish. You painted the scene so beautifully with lovely, vivid imagery,’ amongst fallen leaves’, ‘autumnal day with crisp blue sky. Really love the line, ‘sunset put season further aglow’. Great rhyming and flow throughout. Really enjoyed it. Good luck with the contest. Warmest wishes.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 9/30/2023 7:33:00 AM
Thanks Christina!! So happy to hear from you and so glad you like it! Thank you for the kind words!

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