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Pick Your Topic: Depression and Sadness

This is the age of my discontent when past regrets stench the nights, as seasons leap in haste with my wired despair where autumn trees crackle with pride and chilled sensibilities... how old can I get? Life is now but a fleeting wisp of isolation for one dumping life's passion through human warmth, love's nobility; that all the rubbish filth I carry negates a caress of lost kinship, while moon-glow awaits eventide's song without me. I hear treetops of maples chant to their boughs, wondering how time’s compass has much to swoon about, reeling igniting fireflies for a thrill, a light dance ... so here I am to clear this rotting litter , afraid of growing old alone by myself in a trash of regrets. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Originally Written 7.17.2016 Resubmitted 11.18.2017 for Russel Sivey Contest: Choose A Topic: A, B, C or D

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Date: 7/27/2016 10:02:00 AM
Nette, you have given the subject 'garbage' lots of class with your creative poem. Congratulations on your placement. All the best, Sonia
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Date: 7/23/2016 7:57:00 AM
Congrats! on win nette...well deserved my friend...elegant poem about garbage...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 7/18/2016 10:45:00 PM
Nette, plans for the future would be wonderful if we didn't have to rummage through the trash. Hugs
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Date: 7/18/2016 3:03:00 PM
A most unique and creative take on this theme, Nette! I am sure that most of your life decisions have been wisely made, and your garbage bag will be just about empty of regrets:) Very much touched by your final emotional stamza. Hugs // paul
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:55:00 PM
Nette! amazing angst! Cool poem! jim
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Date: 7/17/2016 10:07:00 AM
Thought-provoking poetry with a distinct angle for this theme! This is excellent!
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Date: 7/17/2016 8:21:00 AM
Outstanding! We need to clear our personal trash to live in a place of love!
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Date: 7/17/2016 6:09:00 AM
- Life is now, do not worry about old age dear Nette - A wonderful poem, good luck in the contest - Happy Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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