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Pick Your Poison

P ower held with in my grip, Run bastard, run.
I nnocence once taken can never be un-ripped.
C olorful the names they'll call me now, hateful;
k eep your pity, you've not poisoned my soul. 

Y earling limbs spread for you and you rode.
O nly anger lofted life above the bloody fray,
u ntil today you'd thought nothing of my pain;
r ancid was your heart, but there are many deaths.

P igeon holed in the alley of your miserable hovel
o n a night as hot as hell, what will it be dear,I ask.
I display a fine array of knifes and a scatter gun,
s oftly I whisper  Run bastard, runand laugh.
O nly, it appeared, he could not make a manly choice?
N o, poison, it’s too meek, too neat for my voice.



Published in Sweet Dreams And Night Terrors 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 8:51 AM
Good lines and a wonderful message relayed so plainly and transparently. A def7
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:44 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..A deep touching topic well hidden..Sara
Yvonne Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 5:34 AM
A very powerful write. Quite impressive! You have a huge range in your writes. I think I would find it difficult to identify you as the writer on many of your poems.
Kiser Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 8:32 AM
That's quite a powerful poem. Well penned.
De Paz Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Hatred and rage are at top in this acrostic very well composed. I am on your side, anyway.
Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2015 at 10:19 AM
I should say never happened to me!
Guzzi Avatar
April 23, 2015 at 1:57 PM
only fiction Mario never happened -
Nunez Avatar
April 22, 2015 at 8:10 AM
The bas...rd deserves it! Awesome write, Deb. We're the weaker sex when it comes to physical strength...once crossed, or trampled upon...man beware...:)
Konos Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 5:50 PM
A little Guzzi goes a long way! Ahhh this is spooky......
Allison Avatar
April 21, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Such deep and dark imagery in your cleverly penned acrostic Debbie:-) hugs Jan xx
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