Pick Up Hiccups

Pick up hiccups
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 Are your legs very sore,
did it hurt when you fell
is that a hint of cologne
on you that I smell?

Winks, yes they're for you,
what a sexy smile
perhaps you care to share your digits
let's sit and chat a while.

What..I didn't get your name,
will angel or baby work okay
I will be the perfect date
if only I can stay.

Woah, why so aggrivated,
this is my first time
I thought I'd try just once
a guys pick up line.

7/14/15
Jessica Thompson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Deo Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:35 PM
wonderful. Funny. educational. shalom, shalom. anil
Thompson Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 6:48 PM
Thank you Anil for stopping by and leaving a nice comment. I am glad you enjoyed this poem. Have a great week! Jess :)
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