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“Miss Fickle, welcome to the sweet and cool drink aisle, Where we serve you with a smile” Oh please, Mr. Chips, Miss Bar One replied, “You could not think of something better to say? Before you know it she’ll head the other way” *rolling his eyes*Mr. Chips retort would you have preferred me to say “Miss Fickle you look smashing today?” Miss. Bar One looked away irate, "Trust you to flirt with anything that wears a skirt, it’s so cliché, so yesterday!" Mr. Chips retorted with a grin, “That’s not what you said when I used that line on you years back” Miss. Bar One replied wiped the smile off his face, “Oh yeah, what does it say about your charms? After all this time you are still on my track” Contest: Grocery Grammar Placed: 11th

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Date: 8/19/2010 6:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/14/2010 12:18:00 PM
I like this one! Glimlag nog breed nadat ek dit gelees het. Dankie vir die comments wardeur dit :)
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Date: 8/13/2010 4:29:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest >> James
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Date: 8/12/2010 8:29:00 PM
HI, Wilma and congratulations on your fin food poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/12/2010 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations Wilma on your win in Linda-Marie's contest "Grocery Grammar ". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:29:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Wilma
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Date: 8/10/2010 2:36:00 PM
Thankxxx Wilma and was so very glad to see u enter this contest.. look for future ones upon my return from Italy ..luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:37:00 PM
Congrats Wilma on your success in my "Grocery Grammar" contest with this super write and thankxxx for supporting my contest endeavors..with luv..
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:26:00 PM
Hi Wilma. Brilliant I don't mind saying its my favourite poem I have read to date. I am more of a PEP Outfitters man myself and I only shop at Checkers , Got the title straight away being half South African , Nice 1 Chick
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Date: 8/10/2010 1:05:00 PM
WILMA, ENJOYED A wOnderful poem LUV~SKAT
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Date: 8/10/2010 10:07:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this great one..I know that it is winners' circle material..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work and stopping by my blog..Sara
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:58:00 PM
cute one!! so much sould be said at the grocery...I love when all the 80-90 year old men flirt with all the young ladies. even not so young. :)
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Date: 8/9/2010 8:40:00 AM
very witty entry, good luck in the contest
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