Pick Me Up

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Can I rest my weary head on you? There is nowhere else to be Just hear your heart, hear it to Beat its steady beat for me Can we be so quiet here? There is nothing I can say No words in me, so much fear You cannot make it go away Just be for a while, just be So I can sleep, not be afraid Because I know that I'll badly Need every soothing thing you said To feel that I am still alive That I am worth to be around That I am here with you, I've Won this time, feel ground. *** Meme by Mel Copyright Darren White September 20, 2016

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Maria Williams

Date: 4/24/2017 1:16:00 AM

So beautiful Dear Darren, it is the best time when one can just be in each others Peace, enjoying the calm of each others Love. It is a truly wonderful emotional piece, A7++

Darren White
Date: 4/24/2017 1:49:00 AM

That is exactly how I hoped you would read this. Thank you :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/22/2017 5:04:00 PM

Just being in silence with somebody who accepts you unconditionally is wonderful. Lovely poem, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:06:00 PM

It is indeed Agnes, something wonderful.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/22/2017 3:31:00 PM

Your poem express great emotion and carries a consistent theme of love's triumph over time and pain. An outpouring of emotions that drips unto the page, seeping deep into the readers thoughts. It is a summary of love, as seen through the eyes a poet, and a tribute to a feeling perhaps passive but not forgotten or forsaken. Emile. #7

Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 11:05:00 PM

Emile, thank you. It is indeed a quietly emotional poem :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/22/2017 1:14:00 PM

Lovely Darren. This piece sings to me. 7 xomo

Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 1:27:00 PM

Yeah, my bf loves this one very much :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/22/2017 7:36:00 AM

Darren Darren Darren there are no words for this. Yes one is alive and yes one has won. Allow me to say this entry is beautifully and wonderfully executed in its entirety in format words and theme. Honestly --Smile --

Darren White
Date: 4/22/2017 7:57:00 AM

This poem is from September 2016, apart from the collab poem with White Wolf, today is not the day for new poems for me :) But yes, Lisa, alive and won...