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Grimly he comes. Day after day, hour upon hour second by second - for centuries into eternity. The face beneath his dark hood he will reveal when he comes for you. 30-word poem/ Nov. 17, 2017 Based on pic #2 for nette onclaud's Pic Motif Contest

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 11/22/2017 8:34:00 AM

I don’t know all that smoking can’t be good for his health. Didn’t he use to do commercials for Marlboro cigarettes or was it for the cancer society either way his career went up in smoke. Great take on this contest. BTW the face he shows you is your own. Scary stuff. A Fav!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/21/2017 9:35:00 PM

That picture reminds me of the men black and that visit I had one night where a person who looked just like this was leaning over me as I was trying to go to sleep. I screamed and covered my head with the covers and he disappeared. Congratulations on your win. It is great to be in your company with this win! Very scary! : )

Constance La France

Date: 11/21/2017 4:54:00 PM

Andrea, this is awesome, so dark and deep . Congratulations on your win in the contest !

Paul Callus

Date: 11/21/2017 4:31:00 PM

Death is a stalker...and any minute it might pounce! We both placed on the same level with our entries, Andrea, but I must admit I like yours more. Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Silent One

Date: 11/21/2017 7:54:00 AM

Nice take on the contest, the grim reaper will come, its a matter of time.. good luck in the contest...

Eve Roper

Date: 11/21/2017 12:01:00 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Afzal Nusker

Date: 11/20/2017 10:00:00 PM

I think you captured the essence of the pic very well. Congratulations!!

Joseph May

Date: 11/20/2017 4:33:00 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/20/2017 3:31:00 PM

awed by the sense of foreboding within your fine work, andie... happy congrats and thnaks for supporting this challenge!

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/20/2017 3:27:00 PM

Nice portrait of the Grim Reaper here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Constance La France

Date: 11/20/2017 1:30:00 PM

Andrea, you picked a dark and evil visual to write on and you wrote an amazing poem, congratulations on your win !

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/20/2017 12:30:00 PM

- Such a great imagery Andrea, congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

Date: 11/19/2017 2:11:00 PM

Wow, Andrea, this one is a little scary. Nicely done; good luck in the contest. John

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/19/2017 6:34:00 AM

So well worded, Andrea, exceptional poem:)

Sneha Rv

Date: 11/19/2017 12:02:00 AM

Ooh this is so great you don't need a picture.. all the best in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/18/2017 6:20:00 PM

Quite a dark one and the pic so spooky! GL in contest Andrea!

John Michaels

Date: 11/18/2017 12:46:00 PM

You made great use of the 30-word limit with this one, Andrea. The Grim Reaper comes for us all eventually... Good luck in the contest. Kind regards, John.

John Lawless

Date: 11/18/2017 12:28:00 PM

Nicely done Andrea.....and he/she comes for us all in his/her time. I like this one...the ultimate stalker!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2017 10:54:00 AM

Ah, yes, this write surely delves deep into the darkness of death...but could be just the revelations of a difficult or seemingly impossible situation, he comes to crush the day...the end game...the finality of death of a moment, surely it would come without a sound, and with something deep inside his eyes! Such fear exposed within your wondrous poem Andrea! I really enjoyed your world of darkness by this impassable being! Great Work!!