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Pic Motifs: Visual 2

Grimly he comes.
Day after day,
hour upon hour
second by second -
for centuries
into eternity.
The face 
beneath his dark hood
he will reveal
when he comes
for you.


30-word poem/ Nov. 17, 2017 
Based on pic #2 for nette onclaud's Pic Motif Contest

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Maurice Yvonne

November 22, 2017 at 8:34 AM

I don’t know all that smoking can’t be good for his health. Didn’t he use to do commercials for Marlboro cigarettes or was it for the cancer society either way his career went up in smoke. Great take on this contest. BTW the face he shows you is your own. Scary stuff. A Fav!

Connie Marcum Wong

November 21, 2017 at 9:35 PM

That picture reminds me of the men black and that visit I had one night where a person who looked just like this was leaning over me as I was trying to go to sleep. I screamed and covered my head with the covers and he disappeared. Congratulations on your win. It is great to be in your company with this win! Very scary! : )

Constance La France

November 21, 2017 at 4:54 PM

Andrea, this is awesome, so dark and deep . Congratulations on your win in the contest !

Paul Callus

November 21, 2017 at 4:31 PM

Death is a stalker...and any minute it might pounce! We both placed on the same level with our entries, Andrea, but I must admit I like yours more. Congratulations!! Regards // paul

Silent One

November 21, 2017 at 7:54 AM

Nice take on the contest, the grim reaper will come, its a matter of time.. good luck in the contest...

Eve Roper

November 21, 2017 at 12:01 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*

Afzal Nusker

November 20, 2017 at 10:00 PM

I think you captured the essence of the pic very well. Congratulations!!

Joseph May

November 20, 2017 at 4:33 PM

Congrats on your win Andrea

Nette Onclaud

November 20, 2017 at 3:31 PM

awed by the sense of foreboding within your fine work, andie... happy congrats and thnaks for supporting this challenge!

Matthew Anish

November 20, 2017 at 3:27 PM

Nice portrait of the Grim Reaper here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Constance La France

November 20, 2017 at 1:30 PM

Andrea, you picked a dark and evil visual to write on and you wrote an amazing poem, congratulations on your win !

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 20, 2017 at 12:30 PM

- Such a great imagery Andrea, congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Gondolf

November 19, 2017 at 2:11 PM

Wow, Andrea, this one is a little scary. Nicely done; good luck in the contest. John

Joanna Daniel

November 19, 2017 at 6:34 AM

So well worded, Andrea, exceptional poem:)

Sneha Rv

November 19, 2017 at 12:02 AM

Ooh this is so great you don't need a picture.. all the best in the contest!

Kim Rodrigues

November 18, 2017 at 6:20 PM

Quite a dark one and the pic so spooky! GL in contest Andrea!

John Michaels

November 18, 2017 at 12:46 PM

You made great use of the 30-word limit with this one, Andrea. The Grim Reaper comes for us all eventually... Good luck in the contest. Kind regards, John.

John Lawless

November 18, 2017 at 12:28 PM

Nicely done Andrea.....and he/she comes for us all in his/her time. I like this one...the ultimate stalker!!

Russell Sivey

November 18, 2017 at 10:54 AM

Ah, yes, this write surely delves deep into the darkness of death...but could be just the revelations of a difficult or seemingly impossible situation, he comes to crush the day...the end game...the finality of death of a moment, surely it would come without a sound, and with something deep inside his eyes! Such fear exposed within your wondrous poem Andrea! I really enjoyed your world of darkness by this impassable being! Great Work!!