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Pic Motifs Visual 1

like diamante globules flickering, glimpses reflect various moods as irises brighten crystalline night I become delirious in her glow where aura of lantern- eyes. dim street poles in shame. Entry for Pic Motifs Contest—nette onclaud 17th Nov 2017 word count 29

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Date: 11/21/2017 9:43:00 PM
Wow Banjo, I really like the way you have expressed this poem with mystery. Last two lines are magnificent! Congratulations on your win! : )
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Date: 11/21/2017 4:55:00 PM
Banjo, you have penned a beauty. Congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:04:00 AM
Splendid imagery ,Banjo. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/21/2017 12:04:00 AM
Banjo, congratulations on your win Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 11/20/2017 3:41:00 PM
love the analogy between light and eyes, banjo; such a splendid poem ... congrats on your award and thanks for sharing!
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Date: 11/20/2017 12:27:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win ! :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:04:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Banjo - Best wishes in the contest and for a wonderful weekend :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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