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Pianoman

Tinkle those ivory keys. Piano man, don’t stop please. We don’t want that hip hop. Play us a jazzy tune. A song to which we can croon And sing about the moon.
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Fowler Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 11:41 AM
Ah, Billy Joel. One of the true greats, just like you! Nicely done Svvie my friend, hugs :)
Volumes Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 10:10 AM
Thanks so much dear Linda. Your comments always come with such a wonderful smile. I will be "off air for a few weeks soon, Jemma and the man she intends to marry are coming for a few weeks. I don't want to miss a second of them being here. Just so you know. Best wishes Svvie.
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September 15, 2023 at 8:34 PM
Good match of photo and poem, SV. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Volumes Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:43 PM
Hi Bill, you know these days I have as much fun choosing and or creating the pictures for my poems. Many time I 'alter the pictures, adding or taking away, or adding two pictures to make it one. Glad you liked this one. SV
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September 15, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Beautiful poem, SV. Although I may lack the ability to play the piano, I possess a skill for deciphering the intricate language of music notation. In my formative years, I diligently acquired knowledge of archaic musical instruments and techniques, immersing myself in their rich history. This passion for music is sure to illuminate my twilight years with boundless delight and contentment.
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September 15, 2023 at 9:40 PM
You are so well versed in so many forms of art it would seem, Lasaad. Some time I would love to engage in conversation and learn more about you. and your history. Thanks for your comment today. Needless to say I cant play an instrument or sing, But I do love music.
Anaya Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:33 AM
You have put me in the mood for jazz, under a moonscape, Cab Callaway! Brought some joy today, thank you, SV!
Volumes Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Your comments bring me Joy Anaya. Your are a honey. Than you so much.
Scott Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 6:21 AM
I always find it hard to walk past a piano - even though I cannot really play or read music. It will undoubtedly be a thing that brings me joy into my old-age. You can write piano poetry all day every day for me :)
Volumes Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:31 AM
Hi Sam, glad you liked my lil ditty about the Piano. We had a piano in our home when I was growing up. My dad was self taught but had an ear for music and could play anything after having heard it played once or twice. I on the other hand was tone deaf .lol Music always filled our house.. Mum and Dad loved singing. Thanks for your lovely comment Sam
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September 15, 2023 at 5:32 AM
Hello SV. This is such a delightful poem. I love the last two lines in particular, ‘A song to which we can croon/ and sing under the moon’ Gorgeous! I totally agree- I rather have a song you can sing too and remain in your heart as this poem does. Loved it. Hugs and smiles to you my friend. Xx. :):)
Volumes Avatar
September 15, 2023 at 9:39 AM
Christina thank you so much for your comment on my poem. I value your words so much. Best wishes SV
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