Audrey Haick Poet Crystalline

Piano Keys

one key does not a melody make
         combined they may scale heaven’s gate

~*~

Note:  For Rick Praise's "The Piano, A Single Crystalline" Contest
May be revised..if I can go take a much needed rest!

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Carolyn Devonshire January 10, 2011 at 5:46 PM Soup mail returned, Audrey.

Vivek Deshpande January 10, 2011 at 6:19 AM Lovely saying....! Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry and giving your precious time. With Love Sapna

Andrea Dietrich January 9, 2011 at 2:38 PM wow, a GREAT message in YOURS!!!

Joyce Johnson January 9, 2011 at 12:30 PM Well done. I don't know how he's going to judge this one with such beautiful lines from most of them. Love, Joyce

Gert W. Knop January 9, 2011 at 10:45 AM Yes, Audrey, they surely do!!!Best of luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments! Have a great week!...Take care!...Gert

James Fraser January 9, 2011 at 5:07 AM I can hear the first key, then leading to the next and the next. Lovely Crystalline, good luck in the contest....:)

Jancarl Campi January 9, 2011 at 12:36 AM HI Audrey, and thanks for your comment. I like what you did here. Indeed combined keys of a piano may scale the gates of heaven. Have a great 2011!!, Jancarl

Michael J. Falotico January 8, 2011 at 12:28 PM Ahhh that is a perfect take on the contest.. Well done my dear friend....with love Michael

Phyllis Babcock January 8, 2011 at 12:18 PM Enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. God Bless Phyl

Kevin Semeniuk January 8, 2011 at 11:04 AM wow! love it! great write. always a fan.

Eamon Duffin January 8, 2011 at 7:06 AM Hi Audrey. The very best of luck with this profound piece. I see life here, heights unreachable if we live it on our own. Eamon

James Peranteau January 8, 2011 at 5:48 AM I just love these Crystallines, the poet can say so much with so little ! Great write Audrey dear poet ! much love, james

Harry Horsman January 7, 2011 at 11:17 PM awesome, really interesting the message here could be adapted to life itself, wonderful poem Audrey. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire January 7, 2011 at 3:39 PM Ah, this is brilliant, Audrey. Profound thoughts in a perfect crystalline. I love the way you describe the keys as a "scale" to heaven! Best wishes in Rick's contest, sweet friend. Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels January 7, 2011 at 12:28 PM Yours is a beauty Audrey.. Hope your weekend will be a great one, love Wilma

Gert W. Knop January 7, 2011 at 7:56 AM They surely do, Audrey! I love short lines beautifully penned! Best of luck for the contest!...Love, Gert

Sara Kendrick January 7, 2011 at 7:33 AM Good one that reads like a winner for sure.Good luck..Your presence at my work lightened my burden..May your gift steadily flow..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta January 7, 2011 at 7:03 AM Beautiful, simply beautiful write. Luck seems quite high in the contest, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich January 6, 2011 at 10:42 PM I really love how you made this into a kind of little observation! Awesome.

Robert Pettit January 6, 2011 at 7:15 PM You don't have a lot of words here, but they collectively convey a lot of clear descriptiveness.

Carrie Richards January 6, 2011 at 7:13 PM Another beauty !!! Climbing up to heaven's gate on beautiful poetry! :)