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Piano Keys

one key does not a melody make
         combined they may scale heaven’s gate

~*~

Note:  For Rick Praise's "The Piano, A Single Crystalline" Contest
May be revised..if I can go take a much needed rest!

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2011 5:46:00 PM

Soup mail returned, Audrey.

Vivek Deshpande

Date: 1/10/2011 6:19:00 AM

Lovely saying....! Thanks for your kind comment on my poetry and giving your precious time. With Love Sapna

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/9/2011 2:38:00 PM

wow, a GREAT message in YOURS!!!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/9/2011 12:30:00 PM

Well done. I don't know how he's going to judge this one with such beautiful lines from most of them. Love, Joyce

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/9/2011 10:45:00 AM

Yes, Audrey, they surely do!!!Best of luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments! Have a great week!...Take care!...Gert

James Fraser

Date: 1/9/2011 5:07:00 AM

I can hear the first key, then leading to the next and the next. Lovely Crystalline, good luck in the contest....:)

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/9/2011 12:36:00 AM

HI Audrey, and thanks for your comment. I like what you did here. Indeed combined keys of a piano may scale the gates of heaven. Have a great 2011!!, Jancarl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/8/2011 12:28:00 PM

Ahhh that is a perfect take on the contest.. Well done my dear friend....with love Michael

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/8/2011 12:18:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem this afternoon. God Bless Phyl

Kevin Semeniuk

Date: 1/8/2011 11:04:00 AM

wow! love it! great write. always a fan.

Eamon Duffin

Date: 1/8/2011 7:06:00 AM

Hi Audrey. The very best of luck with this profound piece. I see life here, heights unreachable if we live it on our own. Eamon

James Peranteau

Date: 1/8/2011 5:48:00 AM

I just love these Crystallines, the poet can say so much with so little ! Great write Audrey dear poet ! much love, james

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/7/2011 11:17:00 PM

awesome, really interesting the message here could be adapted to life itself, wonderful poem Audrey. Harry

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/7/2011 3:39:00 PM

Ah, this is brilliant, Audrey. Profound thoughts in a perfect crystalline. I love the way you describe the keys as a "scale" to heaven! Best wishes in Rick's contest, sweet friend. Love, Carolyn