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Physics of the Moon

Physics of the moon I feel the lunar ecstasy in your heart Connecting our vibes from over 1500 miles apart With every swing of my mood ring, my sensational heart will sing An out of this world phenomenon tune, "you are my everything!" Absorbing every phase the moon goes threw Sending energy between me and you When our eyes meet on the darkest side of the moon Your body mass rotates like a cyclone hitting my land like a typhoon Like the gravity that bonds the earth and moon together Our souls will collide with a massive force of forever The image of you appears at all times like a moon cycle Like a cascade running all around my mind, like a halo circle Our love and vision orbits through every star Giving us light no matter how near or far The stars throb around the moon like a secret signal in the night While you inhale my energy that exceeds into the morning light Like a rainbow that enters and vanishes into the twilight of our sky Our first kiss under the moon beam will twist our tongues into a tie A sweet magnetic shadow will remain under the half moon Sweeping our love above the clouds to float like a balloon Holding a reflection with the moon's tide Our journey continued, side by side Emerging our love to find its way soon Like a love mirage with the physics of the moon :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:24:00 PM
you so cute when in love **SKAT**
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:43:00 PM
O yes, the power of the moon to inspire great poems never ceases to amaze and this beauty is yet another. Hello my Sweet Dark Friend, just delving into your back pocket again, love the feel of your ..... poetry lol. Thank you for your lovely comment on mine, always appreciate a visit from you. Take care, Richard
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Date: 7/6/2011 12:55:00 PM
really enjoyed this P D, especially the second last coupet..
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Date: 10/14/2010 12:35:00 AM
Awesome piece !!
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Date: 10/7/2010 10:16:00 PM
thanks for your comment today, pd, and again HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!! Your friend, Andrea
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Date: 10/6/2010 8:42:00 AM
Very nice, enjoyed this one!
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Date: 10/4/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congrats on your win! You use very fresh language that makes this a delight to read. I love the line "With every swing of my mood ring". Thanks for your lovely comments. Have a great day! Take care, -Mike
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Date: 10/4/2010 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Harvest Moon Contest..Sara
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Date: 10/4/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win P.D. in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Harvest Moon;P". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2010 2:00:00 PM
Hi P.D, congrats on your HM with this amazing couplet ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 10/1/2010 3:12:00 PM
...to a tie....I like the juxtaposition throughout the poem, it 's romantically authoritative and demanding making the write stronger. Congrats on your well deserving HM and thanks for your sweet remarks on who am i? Regards...Rinki.
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:21:00 AM
That last line should be the TITLE of next collection of poems. It is a memorable phrase. Destyroyer, always a pleasure. Regards and thank you from Gerard
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Date: 9/30/2010 2:03:00 PM
hey there pd :)! congrats! really happy this made it to the winners' circle :) see you around, ok?
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Date: 9/30/2010 7:18:00 AM
Good rainy morning here in N.J...pouring ... is your contest stuck? not the Haiku but the other one? I see my placement but not a YES for the winners list luv... must be the double contest or u have to click the next day's date to finalize.. so weird this way but this works for me..hope u have a great day my BFF forever your BFF..best friend forever... BBF best best friends..luv..
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:24:00 PM
Knew this was a winner. Many congratulations.
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:35:00 PM
Gosh this one already has 54 comments. hahaha. congratulations, P.D. I just don't see enough of you.(I'm sure my previous comment must be way back here on the list!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:06:00 PM
Lucky N>D. LVery romantic. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/29/2010 7:48:00 PM
I was so sure this would be in the winners list. (I thought it would be at the top of the list!) Well done, PD. ~ :) love, Carrie
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations DP on your romantic version in your couplet poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/29/2010 6:07:00 PM
Congrats P.D. my BBF on your HM in the Harvest Moon contest.. for this awesome write ..a special honor.. u poetry is always brilliant my friend.. many honors and wins to come ..with luv..
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Date: 9/29/2010 11:02:00 AM
I like this very much...it's inspiring me to try writing a couplet ... not yet summoned the courage to try rhyming:) Thanks so much for your congrats on my recent featured poem:)
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:56:00 PM
a whole book of sensual imagery in this one poem PD . well composed and tastefully presented. enjoyed.-Robert
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Date: 9/28/2010 2:32:00 PM
This is such a lovely poem. I really enjoyed the imagery. Thank you for your welcome comments. Take care, -Mike
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Date: 9/27/2010 9:23:00 PM
A beautiful poem. Thanks for the kind comments.
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:42:00 PM
A beautiful entry you have here, good luckers on the contest, =(^.^)=Royal
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