Phyllis God's Gift

Pretty perky Hardworking Yellow golden hair Loving Laughing Intelligent, industrious So cool

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John Freeman

Date: 8/8/2009 5:54:00 PM

A very beautiful, thoughtful tribuite, with a perfect flow, Sincerely Moses

James Fraser

Date: 8/8/2009 10:39:00 AM

Lovely poem Sara, nice write. When i wrote the poem " What do you want from me " for inspiration i looked to song tracks from my favorite groups, then wrote a poem around them. The poems from these tracks are purely fictitious, and are not associated with the story of the songs. The above title is a Pink Floyd track, one of my fav groups. I also have posted poems made up from the track titles by Heart, Journey & Foreigner>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 8/8/2009 8:28:00 AM

Thought-filled tribute Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome commnts

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 8/8/2009 8:12:00 AM

Beautifully composed.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/8/2009 5:57:00 AM

Phyllis must be very happy about this tribute. Her qualities are admirable. Nice writing, Thanks for commenting on my poetry. Lovingly, Dane