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August 1969, the park, down by the lake the summer afternoon draws to a close laughing, screaming, splashing times, our own fun we would make pure happiness, with torn and muddy clothes. M.V Britannic was the boat by hand my Dad had made, the real one once had taken him to war, at first we took a length of string and tied it to the prow and took turns towing it around the shore. Then Dad fitted a motor, so in circles it would plough (unless the boaters caught it with an oar). When gusts of wind would catch it, then it's course would often change and the chances of retrieving it were slim, you'd have to reach out with a stick when it would come in range and that explains how I first learned to swim. Fast forwards almost fifty years, I still sit on that bank on summer afternoons, often alone as children pass me, zombie-like their faces seeming blank, their fingers tapping on their mobile phones. What summer memories will they have in years ahead, as in ignorance they let precious days slip? Thanks to a photograph the ones of mine have not yet fled, and guess what? We've still got that little ship. Photograph- Me, my younger brother Clive, and the good ship Brittanic, August 1969.

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Date: 8/1/2016 11:00:00 PM
My kids used their imaginations and though they are grown now they have only just stepped into the mobile world. My son camps out with his son and with no cell phone contact. How things have changed. I so enjoyed looking at your family photo and reading your memories of childhood. Thank you for sharing. ; )
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Date: 8/1/2016 11:41:00 PM
Thanks, Connie, long innocent summers, much treasured. Viv x
Date: 8/1/2016 8:36:00 PM
Such a shame for children nowadays Viv. I often think how lucky I was to have missed out on mobiles.
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Date: 8/1/2016 8:56:00 PM
Indeed we were lucky, Jean. We used to go the phone box and dial directory inquiries, who'd give us the latest football scores, when we were out playing. Viv x
Date: 7/31/2016 5:24:00 PM
I just love the nostalgia of this and what you say at the end. SO sadly true. Well, I see my grandkids having wonderful times with their parents because my kids don't allow their young children to have those stupid cell phones tied to them. GREAT poem.
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Date: 7/31/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, your granchildren are blessed. Even though they probably don't know it yet x
Date: 7/30/2016 5:45:00 AM
Great memories,Viv: That was the year I started my Nurse's training in Queensland, I am glad you were out having fun sailing this gorgeous model boat. Thanks for floating us down Memory Lane. SuZ
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Date: 7/30/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thanks, Suzy D, happy times, sadly missed, Viv x
Date: 7/28/2016 7:33:00 PM
Memory Lane. I walk down one of those too and I am so grateful I have such fond remembrances because I saw the sky, the flowers and jumped in the hay. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 7/28/2016 10:25:00 PM
Thanks, Monika, precious days indeed. Viv x

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