Photograph

August 1969, the park, down by the lake
the summer afternoon draws to a close
laughing, screaming, splashing times, our own fun we would make
pure happiness, with torn and muddy clothes.
M.V Britannic was the boat by hand my Dad had made,
the real one once had taken him to war,
at first we took a length of string and tied it to the prow
and took turns towing it around the shore.
Then Dad fitted a motor, so in circles it would plough
(unless the boaters caught it with an oar).
When gusts of wind would catch it, then it's course would often change
and the chances of retrieving it were slim,
you'd have to reach out with a stick when it would come in range
and that explains how I first learned to swim.
Fast forwards almost fifty years, I still sit on that bank
on summer afternoons, often alone
as children pass me, zombie-like their faces seeming blank,
their fingers tapping on their mobile phones.
What summer memories will they have in years ahead,
as in ignorance they let precious days slip?
Thanks to a photograph the ones of mine have not yet fled,
and guess what? 
We've still got that little ship.


Photograph- Me, my younger brother Clive, and the good ship Brittanic, August 1969.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 11:00 PM
My kids used their imaginations and though they are grown now they have only just stepped into the mobile world. My son camps out with his son and with no cell phone contact. How things have changed. I so enjoyed looking at your family photo and reading your memories of childhood. Thank you for sharing. ; )
Wigley Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 11:41 PM
Thanks, Connie, long innocent summers, much treasured. Viv x
Murray Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 8:36 PM
Such a shame for children nowadays Viv. I often think how lucky I was to have missed out on mobiles.
Wigley Avatar
August 1, 2016 at 8:56 PM
Indeed we were lucky, Jean. We used to go the phone box and dial directory inquiries, who'd give us the latest football scores, when we were out playing. Viv x
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 5:24 PM
I just love the nostalgia of this and what you say at the end. SO sadly true. Well, I see my grandkids having wonderful times with their parents because my kids don't allow their young children to have those stupid cell phones tied to them. GREAT poem.
Wigley Avatar
July 31, 2016 at 6:54 PM
Thanks Andrea, your granchildren are blessed. Even though they probably don't know it yet x
Delaney Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 5:45 AM
Great memories,Viv: That was the year I started my Nurse's training in Queensland, I am glad you were out having fun sailing this gorgeous model boat. Thanks for floating us down Memory Lane. SuZ
Wigley Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 1:45 PM
Thanks, Suzy D, happy times, sadly missed, Viv x
Martyn Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 7:33 PM
Memory Lane. I walk down one of those too and I am so grateful I have such fond remembrances because I saw the sky, the flowers and jumped in the hay. Thanks for sharing.
Wigley Avatar
July 28, 2016 at 10:25 PM
Thanks, Monika, precious days indeed. Viv x
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