Phone

Press buttons make a call Partake in a Zoom call Putting someone on hold Plenty of ringer tones Play music, text a friend Pick an app to peruse Photos can be snapped too! 4-8-2021 Pleiades P Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/13/2021 11:20:00 PM

Great description of modern day phones. Enjoyed reading this winner. Way to go. Congrats. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2021 2:55:00 AM

- Back with congrats Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/12/2021 1:39:00 PM

Joseph, excellent description of a phone! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/12/2021 1:21:00 PM

You did this one PERFECTLY for Phone!! Love it. Congrats on your win

Judy Ball

Date: 4/9/2021 4:07:00 PM

Ah, the cell phone we just can't live without these days. Trouble is anyone can now find you no matter where you are. heheheh Very clever piece. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/9/2021 12:57:00 PM

Wow you really do the Pleiades form so well, this one is awesome, really creative and full of wonderful imagination. best of luck in the contest. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 4/8/2021 7:29:00 PM

Yes, a phone allows us to do many things. "Play music" while "snapping a photo" :) Something I am guilty of. Your thoughts bring a smile. You are so clever and creative. :) Brandy

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/8/2021 2:39:00 PM

Phones can do just about everything now - I like all the variety you put in this - should do well, I hope!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/8/2021 1:17:00 PM

- You forgot to send your number ... great written, Joseph :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/8/2021 11:00:00 AM

Your verse is multi-talented just like the phone it describes. Your "P" s resonate in ring tones, Joseph. All the best.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/8/2021 10:24:00 AM

Hi Joseph, What a good description of a modern phone. If you have a phone , you have a computer as well. That was unheard of back in the day. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 4/8/2021 8:08:00 AM

This poem is smarter than my phone! Enjoyed! Good luck in the contest, xomo

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/8/2021 7:27:00 AM

Describes a modern phone to a T, Joseph, well done:)