Phoebe

Proud of my red coat, that others admired,
         or was it the charm and wit I had, that they desired?
               I spent my days basking in the noon-day sun;
    you scolded me for stealing the worker’s lunch, I did it, just for fun!
                 You gave me a world where I was free to roam;
               through woods and fields until you called me home.
               I know there were times, you did not take pleasure,
             in the prizes I returned with, that I deeply treasured.
             I protected you from strangers, with my gnarly bark;
    you let me play at night, chasing frogs and dodging owls, in the dark.
                  You dressed me up and I paraded all around;
     I knew I was the life of every party, a miniature, ten pound hound.
         I was grateful for your tender care, through my golden years;
             I left you with a heavy heart, and eyes, filled with tears.



                                       ~~~~~~~~~~~~~
In memory of  Phoebe Leda Rose our miniature dachshund.
Born May 1998 died Feb. 2013.  She truly was a lively and affectionate dog. The poem reflects her quirky personality that kept us laughing. 
We purchased Phoebe for our 10 year old daughter who cherished her and wrote a poem about her for school.  
Phoebe Leda Rose has very big nose
She wobbles when she walks
And she wiggles her toes.

Date: June 2, 2022
For: Personification – Pets Talking Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance LaFrance
Rhyme verified on rhymezone.com
Placed 1st in contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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La France Avatar
July 5, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Paulette, such an emotional poem and beautifully penned. Congratulations on your win in my contest, blessings ~ Constance
Alex Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 11:37 AM
Great tribute. Congratulations!
Calasibetta Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Christuraj, thanks for stopping by to comment. Phoebe was a delightful dog, we never could replace. :)Paulette
Goldsmith Avatar
July 1, 2022 at 9:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Phoebe" is a Wonderful write. Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
Calasibetta Avatar
July 2, 2022 at 10:06 AM
Thank you so much Paula. She was a delightful little dog...we could never replace. :)Paulette
Baker Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 3:16 PM
Nice tribute poem, Paulette. Your daughter writes well also. :-) Bill
Calasibetta Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 4:32 PM
Thanks, Bill~ Phoebe was quite a character....glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Buehler Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 9:56 AM
Phoebe must have been a constant delight. Your poem was delightful to read, Paulette. Have a nice day, Evelyn :)
Calasibetta Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 3:25 PM
She sure was a delight. Glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 5:15 PM
This is so precious Paulette. Your daughter will always have this poem to remember her pet by as well as her own poem. I am so happy you posted her poem. I have a 10 year old granddaughter who is beginning to write her own poetry and I encourage that so much. You must be proud of your daughter’s poem. I love that we can influence our children into loving the arts. I am sorry for your loss. Blessings xxoo
Calasibetta Avatar
June 5, 2022 at 5:04 AM
Glad you enjoyed it, Connie. Yes, encouraging our young to express themselves through poetry and art is a gift they will carry for a lifetime and pass on to the future generations. Blessings, Paulette
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 3:21 PM
oh wow, this is so poignant. I love this, paulette.
Calasibetta Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 3:40 PM
So glad you enjoyed this~Phoebe was a real character~it was easy to write about her. Enjoy the weekend! :)Paulette
Buhagiar Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:41 PM
Enjoyed the poem. Best for a win.
Calasibetta Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Victor. Have a nice day. :)Paulette
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:31 PM
Beautifully penned paragon, Paulette, including your daughter's afterwords. All the best my friend, Aloha~William
Calasibetta Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 4:47 AM
Thanks so much for comments~I will let my daughter know her school day poem was a hit too! :)Paulette
Rhymer Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:19 PM
Enjoyed the poem about your little doggie.Pretty name Phoebe LEDA Rose.How did it come about?
Calasibetta Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 4:46 AM
Hi Vickey~Thanks for stopping by to comment on “Phoebe”~her name came about because my daughter thought she looked like a Phoebe and the person who we purchased it from was LEDA , while ROSE was for Rose in the movie the Titanic. Now you have the story. Glad you enjoyed the poem. :)Paulette
Delaney Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:05 PM
Such a sweet poem about your precious pet. They really do entertain us in all their funny ways. Best, SuZ
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 5:07 PM
Thank you Suzanne~indeed they do keep us entertained! Thanks for stopping by to comment. :)Paulette
Roper Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:22 AM
Awe, such a touching write.. I love my dog as well... Good luck in Constance's contest. Blessing friend
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Thank you Eve~she was an exceptional little dog we never got another. Blessings,Paulette
Allison Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:11 AM
what a wonderful personification poem, you were so lucky to have happy years together and your daughters poem is charming xx
Calasibetta Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 10:31 AM
Thanks Jan~ yes, we had many wonderful years, she made everyday exciting. Thanks for stopping by to visit and comment. :)Paulette
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