Phenotypic Rage

From my stark cave I breathe the tang of
blood and sweat; your breathing slows in
    alarm palpable and sticky as you
slink away with trepidation. In your staccato
    crawl, rocks tumble
        down from your slope,
        betraying your endurance.

Bats flap elastic membranes as they dart
out from discrete perches within piles of quivering
    motion, while along the glazed ground,
sightless minions of fur scuttle about on
    twiggy claws--
        skittering scratches
        massage the walls. 

My position intractable, I hunker down with
resilience, disgusted by your ignorant
    intrusion and childish ranting; your
banality reminds of tribal hoarding despite
    perilous warnings
        flashed in my moist,
        arrogant eyes.

In mercy, I lash out with purpose to expel your
tormenting indignity and scoffing disbelief as
    screams charge from my pursed lips to
quake the Earth with my justified fury and
    knowing venom to
        ensure only the
        fittest survives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Loveless Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 2:22 PM
Really good John,:)...........julie
Moreno Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 12:46 PM
Amazing work John, loved the imagery and structure...Raul
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